Very cool

Man, 3 month wait for this?

Should’ve stuck with Reinhard for the name.

Well, certainly unexpected. Go forth and seize your opportunities. An incredible end to a enjoyable story.

Very interesting, it seems the MC is both prideful and envious.

Hah. Gotta love the ‘Wahh, Wahhh, I’ve been reincarnated into a species that comes with literal imagination magic and incredibly long lifespan, waahh, wahh.’ Talk. First chapter is well written.

This arc is too looooong. The writing and story is kinda good but it just takes forever to read through.

Dude I really hope that it’s not what I think it is that happened while he was unconscious. He’s a kid, man, literally a child at this point, and while he was asleep? Consent is a requirement man.

Bro what, aren’t they like ten or something?

I don’t get why so many people want the Gate of Babylon, the entire reason it’s powerful is because of the treasures inside it, you could do the same concept if you just had portals and some type of ejection mechanism for powerful weapons. And with the Dark Light, is there even a reason to make the portals?, can just make the Dark Light weapons straight up, have them float around ya, and send them at the enemies.Unless the portals make it easier to form and shoot them, there’s no point.

Dude, I don’t understand why he immediately went for the punch on what seems to be like a 11 year old when he has ten wings. Then again, there are definitely some Greek gods freaky enough to disguise themselves as a kid and kidnap someone. But what about on the off chance that the person you punch just dies? Congrats you just killed this kid?, in front of your daughter no less?, I mean how you gonna explain that.

Oh my god dude, can’t you at least wait until the mcs a pre teen AT THE VERY LEAST. Bros is 8 man. There’s no reason you can’t just do a timeskip or something or make it so he was born earlier than normal. But noooo hur dur, “let’s marry this almost literal toddler to our daughter whose like 18” . Im sick and tired of these fics just like this when the main characters be a child and they be flirting and stuff with people that clearly adults.

This some quality work right here.

Dude, an actual intelligently planned political move from a previous antagonist? I’m not sure I’ve ever seen this before. Absolute KUDOS!

So they shot him with a tracking device then.

Man, the first time I’ve ever physically recoiled from sheer cringe.

Wouldn’t he be adapting to require less food? Or none at all, like the original Doomsday.

The power level difference between him and croc is gigantic, so unless he plans to power up croc or de power himself I don’t see how sparring will help whatsoever.

I mean, if you’re gonna banter you should at least be factually correct. Him saying that they’re unstoppable when they’ve just been meandering in the frozen land for how long?

Man, there’s just no way it’s that convenient. Lame.