DeMoloch
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DeMoloch1yrCommentedBefore we even start, my brother in christ dont put a space between the last word and the . or , it really distracting.
Ivan Smith was an internet addict who only knows to watch Anime and Sci-Fi contents . Unfortunately, his parents passed pretty early , leaving him quite a lot of inheritance but no one to take care.- DeMoloch1yrCommentedCh 20 Chapter 20: A Stage 2!?
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raps = wraps
Creates claws or raps Spacial magic around your claws that can slash through all matter of you have enough control and understanding. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
and = with
"Good now hold your left arm straight with the bow firmly in your hands on the little groves meant for your hands. Ah wait I forgot the arrows I'll be right back!" Adele said rushing off inside to come back out 10 seconds later carrying a small black leather quiver and 15 arrows neatly inside. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
lie = like
I positioned myself lie Adele told me with my left side facing the target and my left hand holding the bow. Turning my head to Adele I tilted my head at what to do next. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
oh cool a bow as main weapon
Curiously I opened the wooden box to reveal a silver bow that was stunningly designed in a velvet cased inside of the box. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
mothers = mother's
Mother was already waiting giving us the 'okay' to enter as Adele opened the door and I walked over to mothers desk. Mother clicked her fingers making a wooden box appear out of thin air and passed it to me. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
mothers = mother's
Adele who seemed to adore me like everyone else I've come to know was dressing me in a small black dress that reached just below my knees and combed my hair, slipping on my small shoes before exiting with me eagerly showing me the way to mothers study. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
be = me, i think you meant
"Hello, you already know my name but I'll say it for the formalities. I am Annalise and this here is my daughter Kiera whom Adele will be serving. You will all be serving one of my children but that will be decided when we are back at the mountain. Any questions?" Mother said standing up and placing be beside her before slightly bowing, looking up and smiling causing Kate to blush a bit, turning her head and covering her mouth with her eyes. Before being pinched on her arm by Sophie who was also slightly blushing. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
sparking = sparkling
After walking for 2 minutes, where I was carried by mother, we arrived at the waiting room and what I found when I entered was a nicely decorated room which was practically sparking at me. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
of should be replaced with and
We headed inside where there was a long red carpet stretched out to the staircase and had rooms going off to the sides, 2 on the left and 3 on the right. There were maids and servants here and there preforming simple tasks such as dusting, watering plants of cleaning things. We walked up to the staircase and took a left turn where there was a hallway with 4 rooms on the left and one at the very end of the hallway. The right side of the hallway was littered with paintings of scenery like a lake or flower fields, walking to the room at the end of the corridor was a painting next to the door which was a painting of Kein in a smart shirt and he was seated on a comfy chair. Kein still had a sword next to him but it was propped up at the side of his chair spreading a shadow moving forwards in the direction Kein was facing. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
preforming = performing
We headed inside where there was a long red carpet stretched out to the staircase and had rooms going off to the sides, 2 on the left and 3 on the right. There were maids and servants here and there preforming simple tasks such as dusting, watering plants of cleaning things. We walked up to the staircase and took a left turn where there was a hallway with 4 rooms on the left and one at the very end of the hallway. The right side of the hallway was littered with paintings of scenery like a lake or flower fields, walking to the room at the end of the corridor was a painting next to the door which was a painting of Kein in a smart shirt and he was seated on a comfy chair. Kein still had a sword next to him but it was propped up at the side of his chair spreading a shadow moving forwards in the direction Kein was facing. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
try's = tries
"Yes she is, she still likes you more though. She's still upset you didn't let her work for you but she try's to not show it." Kein chuckles. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
rapping? you prob meant wrapping right?
There was a big smoothed out area where my mother stood before glowing a red colour slowly rapping around her encasing her in a scarlet glowing light bathing the area around her in a ruby red colour. The light continued to shine brighter causing me to close my eyes shielding them before the light stopped. I slowly opened my eyes revealing a majestic looking black dragon with four big legs, long sharp spear tipped tail and spikes going from the top of her head down her back trailing her spine onto her tail until the end. The spikes, like before in her humanoid form, had a red tint towards the tip of the spikes. She had two horns placed on the top of her head where if it was and animal like a wolf would have their ears. She had a strong jaw and piercing red eyes that seemed to be slightly glowing and long majestic feathered wings of her back just below her shoulders of her front legs. - DeMoloch1yrCommented
its the funny number :D
Reddish-Black [2] - DeMoloch1yrReplied to Sinful_CyanideCh 105 Background Checking
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the main reason I dont think she reincarnated is because she is 20 (she would be asters age if she reincarnated or somewhere around there), so she is either hiding her stats and everything with a boon or she is just a regular person (ignoring she might have reincarnated earlier than the main wave) man that would be funny if she just turns out te be a regular person
Ch 105 Background Checking - DeMoloch1yrCommented
so yeah this is kinda a problem with the title of the book, it takes away the suprise behind most of the characters the mc meets (background). ‐------------------------------‐---------------‐-------------- Anyways so lisa chose the non reincarnation option (cant think of the actual word xD), the fact that poeple cant remember her is either a boon or a negative she chose to get more points
Ch 105 Background Checking - DeMoloch1yrCommented
actually doing my boy pestilence dirty
Conquest, War, Famine, and Death.