Storyline & Plot are to the point.
Apprehensive to read.
Word choice is really good.
Sentence framework is so apt & fluent to read.
Great Work ❤️
Keep It Up 😉🌟
Word Choice, Fluency, Content Framework & Overall Imapact is so beautifully depicted Buddy ✨
Such a nice creation at this young age 💡. Proudly Saying to keep it up & continue this awesome rythyme of writing ✨ Well done Dushi 🌅🌻😃