Oh. That was a great review. I am grateful for it. I will pay more attention to my addicted writing. I'll try to improve. Thank you very much.

I know. I'm actually quite grateful for all your comments. If it weren't for them, I probably wouldn't have fixed the flaws in the chapters. It was all very positive. Thanks a lot

Work overload, writing and translating several episodes before and after my main job give room for failures to happen. Thanks again for letting me know which caps they are in, I am correcting them.

Wow, I hadn't noticed that, thanks for letting me know. I will fix the sentence, unfortunately in formatting some duplicate sentences end up occurring, or even my fault when it comes to sentence possibilities and grammatical paths. Due to the amount of chapters I write per day, it is possible that certain errors like this will appear in other chapters. I apologize. Feel free to criticize always, and point out the errors if you find them. It is constructive and very valuable to me these types of feedback.

It is an extremely lovely short novel. The author has a succinct and subtle writing. Straight to the point dialogues and settings. Rodzz psychologist appears: A personal feeling is evident in the description, a fantasy of "impossible" loves. It's really quite enjoyable to read. Scarlett is a somewhat introverted but confident girl with her feelings.

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"Inferno Ascended" has many references. References that are explored brilliantly by the author. Everything manifests and fits into the story in a natural way, but, with hooks that make you anxious for the next chapter. I recommend this novel as a great read and also as a source of inspiration. The author explores already known figures and references in an original way. Originality with very strong pillars. I will say it again: brilliant. [img=update]

It is wonderful to read this kind of feedback. I am glad you are enjoying the story.😋😋

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I am grateful for the feedback.It's an action novel, but during the course of the story, it will build up into a steamy romance. A little contrived, because of the characters involved, but still, a mushy romance. =P

The plot is good, the writing catches you in the first few paragraphs due to the author's dynamism. The impression is that the story will go straight to the point, but always a new hook appears leaving you more intrigued for the next episode. I liked it a lot.

MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS! This novel is extremely immersive, especially for readers who are also authors. Totally unique story, if there is anything similar I have never seen. The author manages to execute well the interaction of the character, the environment and the transitions. Especially the transitions. Maybe I'm a little invasive in this comment, but this work seems to me a little introspective, some personal aspects of the author seem to be projected into the story (analysis of a psychologist =P) Anyway, great novel to read. I only have praises for the novel.

I confess that what I liked most about your novel was the subtle humor that fits perfectly with the situations in the story. Both your writing and the way of expressing certain interactions of the character with the environment are quite unique. A great novel to read.

I have to confess that I have a weakness for medieval stories, especially this one. Good story, great characters with unique personalities. And the fantasy plot is very well explored by the author.

I love the way you write. It goes very well with the virtual reality proposal of the plot. The emotional projection of the characters as they overcome the challenges are very good. I really enjoyed it.

I have to admit that it is very enjoyable to read the construction of the plot. The story begins by showing a certain naivety of some characters, and that little by little, they are broken as the novel progresses. I liked it a lot.

I have enjoyed the way the story has been building. It is quite characteristic in your writing the emotional storytelling of the characters when confronting situations of fear or imminent risk. Very good.