I tried to make it seem more appropriate for what a kid would do. His family are going to teach him more but the main point of the first outing for Lucius is to learn these things for himself. After all, if ones learns from a mistake, they are much more likely to not forget it rather than if they are simply taught to avoid something. But also, this is my first novel and I don't think I wrote the first chapters particularly well. Ngl I find it kind of annoying myself really.

I got one week of college left and then I have 10 weeks of so I will right more then

Hi Kera. Cosmological Cultivation is just a hobby for me . I study full time and don't actually have that much time to publish chapters that often. I also don't intend to compete in any writing contests as of now. I have barely started my novel so maybe once I have gotten to a stage I am happy with I might compete in a contest. For now though, I am just flattered that you liked my novel. Thank you for your time.