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SlaveOfTheLord2yrReplied to bluS24No, if the soul leaves the body, he can't. Previously, Li Jie's soul hadn't left his body yet because Nicholas artificially maintained his blood flow, he was just unconscious.
Soon, he arrived and after a long search, he found his father's grave.- SlaveOfTheLord2yrReplied to Homelander69Ch 46 Chapter 46: Born Between Two
- SlaveOfTheLord2yrReplied to MikaelZeroCh 47 Chapter 47: Dead?!
- SlaveOfTheLord2yrReplied to MikaelZero
I can't just say that this car brand is better than this, so yeah, I left it to your imagination.
[heh, it's like ***** drivers and ***** drivers.] - SlaveOfTheLord2yrReplied to Homelander69
lol, your comment got shadowbanned because you used cuss words.
Regardless of the reason, she was much more relieved when he was in this form. Even if she didn't want to do anything, just the fact that she had his life in her hands made her relaxed. Her mood was much better as a result. - SlaveOfTheLord2yrReplied to Chaos_Serpent
- SlaveOfTheLord2yrReplied to Myrsha
On the topic of suggestions, I do have one. As you said, this is just my thoughts. I feel that you are influencing your MC indirectly. Do you know about Detachment in writing? I feel that you're too attached. This prevents from writing things that should've been otherwise the course of events. Anyway, just my feeling.
This chapter has been deleted. - SlaveOfTheLord2yrReplied to Myrsha
The thing is, I wrote about everything Artix knew about. I find mystery to be rather stupid, just a way to drag the novel when it should've been found way earlier. I understand your point, in fact, I myself wouldn't have enjoyed reading the info dump bits, I would've just skipped it. Also, I don't mind your comment, you can just keep it if you wish to.
Ch 10 First Round