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Tales_Within_Me

Tales_Within_Me

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A guy who just has a lot of tales within him, and wants to share them with the world. You can also find me on IG: @tales.within.me

2021-05-26 JoinedIndia
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me11mth
    Posted

    From what I have read here, the book is extremely good A totally refreshing Idea with the way Vampires and Hunters have been portrayed in this novel. It isn't exactly reincarnation either, since Chris underwent an experiment of some sorts with his own free will. Kudos to that point. For the people that are wondering if the book is worth a read, I would definitely say it is, due to the way it is penned and strung along together. Though I also have a hunch that the readers would want more, so for the binge readers, I suggest you be patient. The pacing of the story is neither too fast nor too slow for me. There might be people who will prefer a little slower or faster, but I feel the blending is a good mix, taking us between fast and slow, keeping the shifting barely noticeable. All in all, a good book to read, and looking forward to more chapters in the future!

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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me11mth
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    Alright. I found this chapter a little lacking. The element of surprise is there at the end, but the tension that was supposed to be there as he was searching for the meaning of his life was a little lacking. Could have done a better job there. And the anger that he had expressed that he was helpless could have been done in a much better manner. The emotion was shown very slightly, whilst helplessness and anger should have been stressed more there. A good read. Keep it up!

    Ch 3 The Price.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me11mth
    Commented

    A really well penned chapter. Way to go The blending of the imminent danger and his situation was perfect. And the ending cliffhanger is neither too rushed nor too lacking. It's a perfect drop, in my opinion. To the next chapter

    Ch 2 The Second Chance.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me11mth
    Commented

    Okay, my thoughts on the first chapter. It has been well paced, the beginning and the mystery surrounding the perpetrators have been portrayed well. Will need some fixing of Grammar and a re-read will allow you to find some omitted words in some paragraphs that your eyes might have missed. All in all, an extremely good start.

    Ch 1 Collision.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Posted

    So, to begin my review, I would love to point out here that this author has made this book into a work of art. The artist 'BrewingFantasies', has always been a master at mixing some adult elements into the story seamlessly, and they seem to have done it again, only this time taking it up a notch, further indulging me, the reader, into the depths of this world, the character, the tension of the situation, every word has been strung carefully together, woven as smooth as a fabric of silk. I hope the author can keep this up! Great work, keep more coming! P.S.: For anyone considering reading, definitely do!

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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Sunny_Shumail

    A well done job indeed

    "Jack Brown and Sarah Robinson are the winners of this competition", read the paper. After having a close look at Mitchell's face, he resembled the old man he had knocked into yesterday. Once more, he had a smile as he thought of the perfect disguise Mitchell wore.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Sunny_Shumail

    Kind of, yeah. You'll find a lot of similarities, but there will be differences as well. Be ready

    "If this was a murder then, how did the culprit escape without opening the window and the door? It was locked from the inside", he thought as he looked back at the question. He was now sure that it was murder, as he felt the bumps were slightly different, meaning that the quantity of liquid that were in those cups were different.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Tres_Aguila

    You're welcome !!

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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Sunny_Shumail

    Thank you! Will do and try not to disappoint you!

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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Juujuu_Sky

    🤣🤣🤣🤣

    He sat down and pulled out his phone, looking into who the man was and why he had gone missing. 'I will still anyhow take credit for Jack's work. Just let him do all the groundwork. We'll let him know that this man could be a potential person of interest', he thought as he typed a message and sent it to him.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Juujuu_Sky

    We'll see if he really is capable of being the next Sherlock

    'Time to put my observation skills to the test. Why did Sherlock choose me, and why did the system say that I was a hundred percent compatible? I shall find a silver of the answers I am looking for too', he thought as a smirk began to form on his face, and his eyes began to take in every detail around him.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Juujuu_Sky

    Ahhh, Just wait until you read maybe the next one? I think it's 15.

    He pulled out his gun from his holster and was about to knock the door down when a woman came walking out of the door and had flushed cheeks. There were some visible drops right over her cleavage, and she was licking her tongue seductively as she passed by Jack.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Juujuu_Sky

    Indeed it is

    He was also waiting on the autopsy reports from the first body, and here he was dealing with another one within a time of 24 hours. He began to wonder how Sherlock was the best in the business, and for 30-plus years.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Juujuu_Sky

    It's not Hatred. it's more of a matter of Honor. The Holmes name is famous for solving all the peculiar cases. And since there has not been another Sherlock in their family, they will stop anyone who has the talent to rise. To protect their Honor.

    "Even if he has the talent to become the next Sherlock, I will not allow him to. I will keep the Holmes name safe, be it the right way, or the wrong way", he smiled as he completed his wine and left the party, taking a break from all the formalities which was tiring to him.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Juujuu_Sky

    Jack gets hate more than love. He needs some love in his life lol 😂

    He sat down and pulled out his phone, looking into who the man was and why he had gone missing. 'I will still anyhow take credit for Jack's work. Just let him do all the groundwork. We'll let him know that this man could be a potential person of interest', he thought as he typed a message and sent it to him.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Juujuu_Sky

    And unless a mistake is made, you can't nab them

    Ch 13 Investigation's On!
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Juujuu_Sky

    It's a roundabout case. indeed it's going to be hard. Being against someone who is as smart as him is going to be tough to solve.

    Ch 13 Investigation's On!
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Juujuu_Sky

    I hope so too!

    Ch 12 A Connection?
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to Juujuu_Sky

    Guess there is a ship already?

    "What are you doing here?", he asked as he looked at her. She smiled at him faintly and handed him a card, which contained her details. He looked at the card and back at her, as he was still shaking from the fact that she worked in forensics.
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  • Tales_Within_Me
    Tales_Within_Me1yr
    Replied to

    🤣🤣🤣🤣

    "What are you doing here?", he asked as he looked at her. She smiled at him faintly and handed him a card, which contained her details. He looked at the card and back at her, as he was still shaking from the fact that she worked in forensics.
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