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Lawless_jack

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All I do is work and read bro Sometimes I write too

2021-05-25 JoinedGlobal
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    Lawless_jack2yr
    Commented

    No i love it

    -end flashback (am I doing too many of these?)
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    Lawless_jack2yr
    Commented

    I love that youve incorperated several occurances where the mc and his friends are just having fun acting like normal teens it really rounds out the story

    "Right with you o mighty Silver Raven." Replies my friend with a grin as well.
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    Lawless_jack2yr
    Replied to Eduardo_Gamer_8035

    Not a bad idea i just think i wanna do an oc

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    Lawless_jack2yr
    Replied to Eduardo_Gamer_8035

    Probably not probably going to be an oc

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    Lawless_jack2yr
    Replied to Ozonelayer

    Scallions

    (A/N: So I had written like 3 chapters before publishing any of them so I could go proof read through them. It took me a few days and I ended up reading another fanfic before I published anything when I came across one where the author used my MC's name so I didn't feel like being called a copy cat since he literally published his a few days before I got to do mine so I went through changing the name in mine. His name was originally Zucchi but I changes it to Scalis. If you see any that I missed, my bad bro.)
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    Lawless_jack2yr
    Commented

    You keep doing you this is gold

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    Lawless_jack2yr
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    This chapter has been deleted.
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  • Lawless_jack
    Lawless_jack2yr
    Commented

    This is beautiful…. As always another work of art author 🙏

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  • Lawless_jack
    Lawless_jack2yr
    Replied to BigStig97

    Those are some great ideas and im def a guy lol i was thinking of adding a scop link in the hand and maybe s spare saber compartment in the tricept area

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    Lawless_jack2yr
    Posted

    I absolutely cannot wait for you to post more of this masterpiece More More More More More More More More More More More More More And thank you

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    Lawless_jack2yr
    Replied to Rebel_Royal5

    No particular reason other than i really like starkiller

    'hmm, so I can only choose 2 holocrons and 2 of them are more expensive than others. Probably because they hold knowledge of both the light and dark side of the force. Buttt I got to have them. Darth Nihilus was cool but I would essentially have to murder someone everyday just to survive. That's a no go for me, I feel like that would sway me more to the darkside and I kind of want to keep it balanced.' I muse looking through all my options. 'Okay system, I want to purchase 3 health stems, Revan's Holocron, Galen Marek's Holocron, and a set of training droids'
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    Lawless_jack2yr
    Replied to Nathaniel_Clayton

    You are very right

    I wandered my way into the monastery letting the force guide me to where Obi-wan and Ventress were still fighting. There was a lull in their duel, they were a few floors below me fighting on a bridge. 'Good a time as any.' I muse before shucking off my robe and dropping down onto the bridge to give my master a reprieve. "Master, the platform is secured. Shall I give you a breather?" I asked hoping he wouldn't order me to sit this out.
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    Lawless_jack2yr
    Replied to BigReader500

    Sorry About that

    Ch 1 Reincarnation Of Ty!
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    Lawless_jack2yr
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    Obi-wan and I took a transport ship to the destroyer class ship in orbit and then cleaned up a bit before meeting back in the hanger. When I arrived there were two Jedi Interceptors waiting. Obi-wan's normal red and white and beside it was a blue and white one matching my bd-1 droid. "This one will be yours Ty, I know Anakin gave you some lessons on piloting so I don't doubt your capabilities in the slightest." He says walking me over to the white and blue fighter. There was an R2 unit preparing to board, but BD-1 jumped from my shoulder landing on the ship and started beeping and whirling at the R2 claiming that he was going to be co-piloting with me and there was no need for the white R2 unit who seemed to put up a small argument before turning and leaving. "I suppose he will be riding there, haha." Obi-wan commented with a chuckle at BD's antics.
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    Lawless_jack2yr
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    I decided to go with a subspecies of human, Miraluka. I want that cool look of being blindfolded but still have the ability to see through the force. I put scars all over my face and body. The scars and missing limb are from childhood before the Jedi Order found me. I then got to choose my lightsaber and I picked a split saber like from the later parts of the video game "Jedi Fallen Order". I picked some clothes to start with, nothing fancy, just some tan shirt one sleeve long and the other missing showing off my mechanical arm, brown pants, lighter brown tunic, white trooper boots, and dark dark brown Jedi robes. (See cover picture)
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    Lawless_jack2yr
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    *beep wooop beedeep* bd-1 chirps cheerfully then runs up my arm to sit on my shoulder.
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  • Lawless_jack
    Lawless_jack2yr
    Commented

    I Wrote his eyes Open but obviously he doesnt have eyes thats my mistake

    After an hour of merging memories with this body my eyes open to a dinging noise from a white and blue box on the small table. My memories cluing me in on what it is. I stood up from my meditative stance. Walking over I picked up the "box". "Wakey wakey bd-1. I think we're almost there." I tell the droid I built together with Anakin in some rare down time he had from the war while the Masters required him to help in training some of the younglings. We always hit it off, and he was always more inclined to spend time training me and teaching me odd things I wanted to know, like about building droids and little tips and tricks with flying. He was always amazed at my ability to see things others couldn't despite my lack of eyes. Apparently my race was becoming more and more rarely seen by the Jedi. All Jedi learn the basics of [force sight] but my race was better with it and more inclined with the ability. I gave Anakin a few lessons in the skill when he asked a few questions about how I saw things. Master Kenobi even gave me lessons in negotiating and I picked up a bit of my wittiness from him. That explains my higher than average charisma stat. 'Obi-wan should be pleased getting a padawan he knows and has had some hand in teaching already.' I muse as bd-1 unfolds himself and does some stretching, bouncing from foot to foot.
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  • Lawless_jack
    Lawless_jack2yr
    Commented

    I know jar’kai is an off shoot of niiman but i like it better this way

    Forms: Form I Shii-Cho, IV Ataru, Form VI Niman, Form VIII Jar'Kai
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