Keily_7107

plz can someone tell me what the end about the other timeline is for

I'm just confused and don't understand plz explain

I have to ask what point of the branching timeline inserts at the ends. It is honestly annoying and seems like a pointless info dump. will he go back or something but from what we read in those there is no point in that everyone he knows would be long dead. so again what's the point?

its obvious ur making the chapters shorter and shorter

tf was that he just kept posting the same thing again and again tf

this chapter seems pointless but might mean smt later I hope

I'm stopping here this story has 2 many holes. fanfic doesn't usually have to follow logic but it still needs to make sense. an the mc actions make none

for your next Harry Potter fanfic let the love interest be Hermione Daphne and Susan please.

why is he suddenly hearing voices, u seem to have made him reckless and a bit crazed why is that

smt irl is likely distraction him because his writing slip is 2 abrupt to much normal quality drop