Skilgannon_Gemmel

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Skilgannon_Gemmel5 years ago
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The author has a story that while it takes a few chapters to feel more concrete and stable has very creative ideas, and is able to describe actions well to help you feel the movement within the story. There is some bloat early on though, and if you push through that the writing does improve. Keep up the good work!
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Invoker: Avatar Of The Demon God

Life turned real bad for Gabriel. Thirty five years old, single, no kids, and accountant who launders money for the mafia. That is until they found out he had embezzled nearly a million dollars from them. With only $12,000 left because of his incessant spending. Gabriel needs to disappear but where? In the biggest craze of the past year. The virtual reality game Godsland by Zenix Corporation. Except he has not played a game since a child. Shouldn't be too hard right?

Skilgannon_Gemmel · Games

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