Jacob_Hickok

I'll be completely honest, this story and the author's other blademaster one, are significantly better than the vast majority (I'm talking 90%) of books on this site. The pacing, background, and plot are very well put together and honestly complaint I've ever had reading these is that I read too fast and ran out of chapters. This may sound like glazing, because it definitely is, but I haven't enjoyed a story like these in quite a while, between ai-ridden trash, gooner-harem smoothbrain wastes, and the author curse which hits author's who write well, they're very hard to find. In Short, I'm very happy to have found your stories and continuously look forward to more.

I absolutely love this story and how it's progressing so far!

I love this story so far can't lie at all.

This was a great chapter, I've been enjoying this story since the beginning and look forward to more.

These were great chapters, thank you for writing them!

I'm really excited to read this story and so far, I think it's great. I'm happy you're posting on Webnovel again and am excited to see more!

Genuinely just so good, I can't explain just how much I'm enjoying every chapter of this story, it's such a nice spin on the Elden Ring story with expanded details.

This story is genuinely very good, I personally agree with most of the commenters/reviewers that this is the best dbz fic I've read. The characters are written very well in the fact that the author is able to start with me not liking some characters, and through their story have me change my mind (granted I'm not that stubborn), which is impressive. The story is paced quite well and the setting is fitting and accurate enough as far as I can tell. Overall great story and I'm excited to more!

Welcome back Author! I hope you're able to find a pace that works good for you and can stay steady. (not just on the books even though I'm really excited)

I imagine it's supposed to be "Motohama-kun", since she doesn't know his past life.