Its pretty good like the modern aspect a few fixes are needed but overall pretty good. I would say it could use a little work and more backround on the character and his friend but its good in all honesty

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

sorry the last chapter was so short I had quite a few things to do yesterday

hey guys this is my first ever book so if you read the chapters please make sure to comment and tell me if I need to improve anything thank you

this is an amazing book you should really turn into like an actual series GG my guy good job