Oh my word. This is insane. Actually insane. The sentence structure is perfect. I can feel the stress and confusion of the situation through this paragraph. I am struggling to find the words to describe how awesome this last part of the chapter is.

Love this! Read up to the fourth chapter now (that’s what is currently available to read) and I’m already finding a connection with the characters. The atmosphere is extremely well built with descriptions that allow the readers to visualize where the characters are in the story. As soon as I saw that another chapter was out I read it and I’m sure I’ll do the same for the next!