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In cover > Yamada from Boku No Kokoro no yabai Yatsu

2021-05-23 JoinedGlobal
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  • ZaBunny
    ZaBunny2yr
    Replied to PyroSaiyan

    I understand completely, but I think there was a misunderstanding or pervaps I didn’t express myself well. I think it would be good if you could add his status at the end of each chapter like an Author’s Note (AN). This way, it doesn’t affect our reading experience (if people don’t want to read the status, they can just skip to the next chapter) And it would help people who forgot about his stats or skills. All you have to do is copy and paste the status at the end so I don’t think it will impact your experience from an author’s perspective either. Hope this help make your story even better than it is right now and once again good luck

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  • ZaBunny
    ZaBunny2yr
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    Pretty interesting start. The author doesn’t go for the usual plan of Rebirth —>Training & meet love interest—> Canon Mineta’s personality and physical changes are explained, he comes in contact with different characters (not momo or tsuyu like the other ff, in fact they are not even part of the main cast). He has a goal which is different than just being number one hero, and there are 10 chapters and no love interest so far so that’s good (I just personaly don’t like it when they get together by chapter 5). AND, the chapters aren’t filled with just the mc’s status, which is a good thing since we can focus entirely kn the story (maybe the author could put it at the end of every chapter. Please?) For a start it’s good -I’ll leave it in my library and wait for more chapters - and I definetly RECOMMEND it to all MHA fans. Thank you author for your time and effort and I whish you good luck.

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  • ZaBunny
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    Commented

    Izuku’s secret ...

    The skill was useful, extremely so. It gave me a basic description of whatever I was looking at, and it even told me if certain books were skill books or not. I used it on people, and it gave me their full name, stats, and a basic description of the person.
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  • ZaBunny
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    Yamada

    Yamada Anna : Boku no Kokoro no Yabai Yatsu (Manga) >
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  • ZaBunny
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    MC has neck-length black hair with some red streaks here and there and red eyes. He is as tall as Kagami from Kuroko no Basket (check picture in paragraph comment) >
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  • ZaBunny
    ZaBunny2yr
    Replied to Sonu_Siraj
    MC has neck-length black hair with some red streaks here and there and red eyes. He is as tall as Kagami from Kuroko no Basket (check picture in paragraph comment) >
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  • ZaBunny
    ZaBunny2yr
    Replied to crss

    Sry for the late reply. The love interest will be introduced in a few chapters

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  • ZaBunny
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    Commented

    Yamada Anna. (She's in middle school in this pic so hands-off pervs)

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  • ZaBunny
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    Commented

    Akane Machida

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    Rintaro

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    Kiryu

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    Commented

    Ushijima

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    Sakusa

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    Komori

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    Oikawa

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  • ZaBunny
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    Commented

    Machida Akane

    Machida Akane : My OC >
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  • ZaBunny
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    Machida Yuki

    Machida Yuki : Namaikazakari (Manga) >
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  • ZaBunny
    ZaBunny2yr
    Commented

    Sigh… for the uncultured pettanko = flat chest

    "Pettanko"
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