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YoungMasterLemon16

YoungMasterLemon16

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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon1611mth
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    Bro is really living up to his title as the lord of madness.

    (This Chapter is dedicated to Ezio Auditore, best assassin's creed protagonist by a wide margin.)
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon1611mth
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    I appreciate the support fellers. I feel like my writing is getting progressively better the longer I keep at it (getting pointers from another writer also helped a fair bit lol).

    Ch 6 Planning
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon1611mth
    Replied to IgnitedReader

    What?

    Returning back to the boarded up store, I checked my surroundings before coating my fist in void energy, and punching through the shop's door. Maintaining the energy fortification, I stretched my hand around until I found the door locks. I unlocked the door and pulled my hand back out, shaking the dust and wood chips off of it.
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    Getting Krumped in DC with Edgy Space Magic
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon1611mth
    Commented

    Yeah, but you could've pimped out your robo buddies...

    With Artificer, I might be able to create some whacky artifact that could help me escape, but I don't see that happening anytime soon, which only left Astrologer.
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    The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon1611mth
    Commented

    That's an... interesting decision. Authors normally don't create discords till they're at least 30ish chapters in.

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    Young Justice: Ghost
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon1611mth
    Commented

    I hope you're better now man, we missed ya.

    (A/N: I know, I know, I went afk for long and didn't say anything. In my defence, I had a pretty big succession of real life problems that made it nearly impossible to sit down and write much less publish anything decent. Still, you know the drill, 3 new chapter in Sheo.bio and two here. Link in the comments Enjoy!)
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Commented

    Yep.

    2: Lady Maria
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Replied to TyrantTron335

    Right you are, I'll fix it right away!

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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Replied to Loophus

    I completely agree with you that this fic has its fair share of problems, especially with character personalities as that was my main problem with writing. However, I feel that a 1-star rating was possibly a bit harsh? If nothing else, I believe that my grammar alone brings it up to 2 stars.

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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Commented

    It's not really simping if you're in a relationship tbh.

    "Ugghhhh!" I find myself groaning again as my thoughts circle back around to missing my wife, I turned into a simp.
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    HOTD/ASOIAF: Unbowed Unbent Unbroken
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Commented

    I swear, everyone in cultivation novels are as dense as a black hole.

    It seems that Yuechan was worried about Asgard! — all of them nodded in understanding.
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    Singularity in Primal Chaos [Completed]
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Commented

    That's certainly a way to prevent theft.

    "No Mr. Blackwood on the contrary. These talismans are actually seals for the powers contained within them. I suspect if released these powers will seek out a new holder."
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Replied to Loophus

    Yeah, I get where you're coming from and I do want to clarify that this isn't a revenge fic. I was just trying to show his frustration with no one trying to rescue him, not even the kid who he'd saved. And yes, he will get his burger soon.

    Ch 4 Awaken, Moon-Blooded
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Replied to Mr_Cuak

    I don't know if that will happen, but they definitely won't be friends. 😅

    Ch 4 Awaken, Moon-Blooded
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Replied to Mr_Cuak

    He may not be a hero, but I'm not going to make him a villain. It would be easiest to align him with the Justice League, but because of the nature of his abilities, he wouldn't be able to side with them for long.

    Ch 3 Regret
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Replied to DAT_NOVEL_BOI

    She is, it's a goofy-ah lost in translation moment.

    "His Excellence…"
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    Singularity in Primal Chaos [Completed]
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Commented

    I hope it lets him integrate the stones with himself.

    I figured it wouldn't be wise for me to leave the mask behind and although I wasn't planning on using it for the time being. I figured it could serve as a hidden trump card, when I figured out what it could do.
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Commented

    That's what I'm talking about.

    (Note: This chapter is dedicated to the fluff lovers, here you go.)
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Replied to Ya_Boi_Rizzin

    😑

    Some sick FUCK decided to take a mother's child that died prematurely and turn them into undead servants. Just the thought of it sent searing rage down my spine.
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  • YoungMasterLemon16
    YoungMasterLemon161yr
    Commented

    Not a very challenging task, might I add.

    "- I have a report I feel compelled to share." I nod toward my hand after leaving my thoughts I drifted to. "Last night Prince Daemon bought out a pleasure house to entertain officers of the city watch and other friends of his..." Here he goes again, once more he tries to drag my brother through the mud.
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