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HolyCentaur6mthCommentedThis is a bad story. I mean if qin Chen is even a little bit intelligent, he could just publicise the kidnapping of fmc. The mc is not that good either. He is just a emo kid who transmigrated into a villain. If he was forced or was assigned missions to this by a system, it would make sense but he got free reign and chose to be some emo villain. This trope is just getting bad and bad.
Ch 13 Accusation and Friendship- HolyCentaur7mthCommented
This novel is dumb. first it is said that abilities are random. No two people have the same abilities. Then come the royal family where abilities are somehow passed down? Why is that? Does that mean both son and father have the same abilities when the father is alive? Or does it awaken in the son after the father is dead? If so, why is he named null? Because technically speaking, he is to awaken after his parents death if it is “passed down” and “no two people can have the same ability at a time”. Regardless of which, I’m already expecting thousands of poison resistance gifts, shadow gifts suitable for assassins. It was mentioned that there were a billion gifts. All are unique? Let’s see how “unique” they are.
Ch 4 The Royal Palace - HolyCentaur7mthReplied to Ceaseless_Voices
Imagine a man holding holding a knife and is trained on how to kill. Now imagine another man squeezing his heart and killing him from a mile away with telekinesis.
"Junior Sister Chen, thank you very much." Li Ming sighed and stood up. - HolyCentaur8mthReplied to Kyosuke_Uchiha
That's just a failure on your part. You don't even know how the reader would interpret what you wrote.
She stopped and let her explanation sink in before continuing "Thor, don't ever say that you know what what he or any else has been through. You've never been tortured or used as a killing machine, nor mentally broken down and rebuilt. Your a god and most likely live a luxurious life in Asgard so no, you don't know what he's been through" - HolyCentaur9mthReplied to Felwinter
Thats like a fox entering a chicken-coup but not killing them because it just entered and did not want to appear as a bad guy. Like its going to eat them anyway. Why wait? Brainless mc.
'You've been here for 4 hours Dante. You can't make enemies of a highly feared line of nobles, Dante. There's a reason people fear them, Dante and given they aren't powerful themselves they must have powerful friends. You could become a wanted man, Dante.' His thoughts were erratic, actively chastising himself for considering killing them all then and there. - HolyCentaur9mthCommented
This is not marvel anymore. According to cannon, Steve always jumped into fights with bullies but was defeated and also always took help of bucky who tried to stop him.
Schiller and Steve briefly talked about Matt's life. Steve said with a sigh, "Maybe I'm not as good as him, because when I was still a normal person, although I couldn't stand a lot of things, I didn't have the courage to stop them, because I knew I couldn't beat those people and getting injured would definitely hurt. - HolyCentaur9mthCommented
Knowledge, not ability. Anybody with enough knowledge can do it.
This paragraph has been deleted. - HolyCentaur9mthReplied to BrianGallacher7
He wants to not be part of the plot, but wants to live in the plot.
"Hell's Kitchen," Schiller replied. - HolyCentaur9mthReplied to Door_kun
Indeed man. My heart broke seeing all the comments disappearing from the chapters of my first novel.
[ShaneFreak: I am only editing these chapters because some people give reviews about bad grammar...] - HolyCentaur9mthCommented
Yes!!!! Now he will now he will just crying cuck kaneki-imitation. Drop.
"tch, I decided I will not meet any Blonde hair women and mainly those who use Black swords and armor, " I said. - HolyCentaur9mthReplied to Tenebris_Necros
It is because nobody saved you that you must save others and not let others face the problems you faced.
"why do I have to care about them? Heroes should do that work.… No one saved me then why should I save someone" - HolyCentaur9mthCommented
He should have been named Mohammed Ali, son of Tony Stark
So she quit her job, came up with an excuse via email for all her parents and friends, left New York City, and eventually gave birth to this child, naming him Mark Li. - HolyCentaur9mthCommented
Drop.
So she quit her job, came up with an excuse via email for all her parents and friends, left New York City, and eventually gave birth to this child, naming him Mark Li. - HolyCentaur9mthReplied to VXZD_ZD
- HolyCentaur9mthReplied to DrunkenClouds
This guy @jahmii looks like he is part of the boruto supporters and one of. the sakura simps.
This paragraph has been deleted. - HolyCentaur9mthCommented
This is bull. You could have at-least searched up some answers to questions online instead of making up answers. It would have seemed more realistic.
The bald man's eyes scanned the vacant hotel hallway, his mind still racing with mathematical equations and theoretical concepts. Turning to his student, he said, "What if you tried using the hypotenuse of triangle A instead of triangle B? You could use it to calculate the value of X using the integral method." - HolyCentaur9mthReplied to Dragon_above_all
He probably has two parents. Not a mom and dad. Just two parents, if you know what i mean.
" You bastard, what more do you want from me? If you go any...any..ftttt, pffhahaha you bas hahaha..stop it..please...hahaha....I...I..hahaha." - HolyCentaur10mthCommented
It’s nice he reincarnated. Wouldn’t have survived in the real world with that iq.
Now that I saw him this close. His feature matched Jin's description that I remember. A dependable guy with an extraordinary appearance and charisma. His blonde hair looked like golden threads and those blue eyes were clear as the sky. But for me, he was a dangerous person. - HolyCentaur10mthCommentedCh 23 Chapter 22