I still can’t help, but feel that this is too fast paced, I feel as tho I haven’t actually been given time to bond and grow to care for any of thEse characters and their relationships with one another.

Hmm, I think thinks are a little rushed and aren’t paced properly, introducing the familiar felt off especially just Casually throwing a line that it could fly felt Off, but that could be me🤷🏻‍♀️

I wonder if that’s who his name was inspired by or was it purely coincidental ?

Every time I see Edmund I think of the one from Narnia 😸

Another Interesting chapter , I Really Enjoyed it!

Interesting

So she let go of Him does she distrust him? Hmm I Wonder 🤔

Currently waiting for it xD

He does reread the series a lot, so that might have had a hand in it, idk🤷🏻‍♀️

Okay, so she does have feelings for him,but Is too prideful got it, so I am guessing it’s the same for him as well?

This felt a little fast paste and could have been build up more, but seems interesting enough so I am hopeful that the pacing gets fixed as the chapters progress.

This is a pretty interesting read thus far, I clicked because the book cover reminded me of a female inuyahsa and I am glad that she did since I am enjoying it.