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Irig_Mumin

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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin1yr
    Posted

    well, the story was quite good in the beginning but as story progressed further, it digressed like a rolling stone. Honestly reading it felt like a chore, a homework i had to finish to be quite exact. firstly, the naming sense of the writer is quite bad, he is trying to use the name of mythological gods like thor, loki ,etc and more from the same mythology and it feels like.... misplaced. The story mostly revolves around girls like every new ark is about adding a girl to the harem and the next ark to justify how they were related to the mc's past life, it is like a routine at this point. The thing that made me drop the story is how the writer just makes mc travel to past and sometimes to the future disrupting the whole timeline and the flow of the story which was going at a nice pace. The story had a quite good potential but at this point i don't see it being unearthed.

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    Reincarnated With The Strongest System
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to Knight_Wolf

    Well because the coc character are now real. They are alive and technically, Olivier isnot used to killing yet.

    Ch 11 CHAPTER 11 - FIRST BLOOD
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to CobraQuantum

    How kratos greets his chief:😂😂😂

    "I, Kratos greet the chief. "
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to CobraQuantum
    "I, Astrid greet the chief. "
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to CobraQuantum
    Kratos signaled for Olivier to start with an encouraging smile, which looked awkward on his face. Olivier smiled and sat down cross-legged, closing his eyes to start the process.
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to CobraQuantum

    Thanks! I corrected it.

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Fantasy ¡ Irig_Mumin
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to CobraQuantum
    ZEUS, THE BARBARIAN KING. AGE 83
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Commented

    thanks for reading man😊

    Ch 16 CHAPTER 16 - GOAL: RESCUE!
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    Fantasy ¡ Irig_Mumin
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to TheDNAlien

    Once you upgrade the town hall and unlock new troops, it will be fun to play!!!!!

    Ch 14 CHAPTER 14 - THEY ARE BACK!
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to TheDNAlien

    Haha...The new update came out just a few days ago.. Anyways, HAPPY CLASHING!

    Ch 14 CHAPTER 14 - THEY ARE BACK!
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Commented

    thank you

    Ch 15 CHAPTER 15 - WRATH!
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to Unholy_Student

    Thanks! I will fix that.

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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to TheDNAlien

    That some great idea. he vould shoot a middle finger arrow to those he do not like as well

    Olivier had developed a good relationship with archers as well. He was helpless against those cold ones like Aria but he was jolly with some of the lively ones like Mina. Meanwhile, archers liked Olivier as well. He was kind and respectful to all the archers. He was polite to all of them and they could sense that he was never out of line. He also had some unique perspectives about archery. Some of them were quite bizarre but they were things they had never thought of. Most of all, Olivier was always passionate about archery. He always said that being an archer was cool. This made the archer quite pleased.
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to R0berto

    thanks😀😀❤

    Ch 14 CHAPTER 14 - THEY ARE BACK!
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to R0berto

    I will introduce the other part of the world as well when the time is right..

    Ch 13 CHAPTER 13 - ARCHERY TRAINING
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to R0berto

    Thanks. I will, for sure!😊❤

    Ch 12 CHAPTER 12 - FOUR ISSUES
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to HxHEnthusiast

    gagagaga

    Ch 9 CHAPTER 9 - KRATOS AND THE BARBARIAN KING
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Posted

    Love it! read the whole story in one go and now i am baffled by all these things that i am feeling inside. a roller coaster of emotion!!!

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    Morphing Iniquity
    Teen ¡ Tailrs ink
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  • Irig_Mumin
    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to Ozonelayer
    Ch 4 CHAPTER 4 - THE BARBARIANS
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    Irig_Mumin2yr
    Replied to Ozonelayer
    Ch 1 CHAPTER 1 - WELCOME CHIEF
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