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It’s a good chapter but you have to seriously think about giving an objective to Infinite because it is true to the original but it is not completely Infinite sonic games gives it an objective for example "It wishes to return in its original multiverse" otherwise it will become bland and difficult to evolve your character. I’m sorry if I’m giving you a lot of my opinions and I seem to be criticizing your work but I don’t see all the fuss on the spider-verse and I would love for you to keep going without having a script problem later thank you for your work.
You could do an OC so that we don’t get what you reserve for the love interest, you could even kick it that won’t have any impact with the hot characters. PS: Sorry for the spelling I am not anglophone and I use a translator. Otherwise continue like this you manage