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Writing
of reading
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Read books
Cessation
Show, don't tell. Let your reader piece it together when it happens. now that the reader knows there's going to be issues there's no suspense for the next chapters.
I think the author changes his mind on things but forgets to go back and change it in earlier chapters?
Affirmative
Let's GO!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyone else reading his name as Kanye?
"People die when they are killed"
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Aw shit there's no Fire Lord for the joke to work...
I think you mean Father Lord
Valeron had a white core and he shared it due to the spell
I agree with that. River Styx right?
I want you in my room!
I want you in my room!
I want you in my room!
I think they're just curse words