Jenny_Hitt
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Jenny_Hitt2yrCommenteddisperse
However, Quinn had obtained a mass amount of energy from the fourteenth castle, and he also had his own after going through so many different experiences. Holding it in his hand, the Vampire Lord ran forward and threw it out back towards Laxmus, but the Original King was unafraid and instead charged forward as well. The ball started to expand, but with his special hardened black hands he held onto the aura, and threw it up in the air, for it to slowly diperese.- Jenny_Hitt2yrCommented
The mark has to be from the big tree in the base. I vote chop it down or burn it.
It branched out like a tree route spreading branches across the back. - Jenny_Hitt2yrReplied to AimeeLynn
Your Soke is correct..that action described is certainly a lunge. However with the context you’ve only mentioned squats. So I thought she stopped doing squats to do push-ups then would resume the squats?
"I heard that. Twenty push-ups, then you'll start the lunges again," he called without turning to look at her. - Jenny_Hitt2yrCommented
Sensors*
Knowing what was happening, Logan had set up senses in parts of the hallway that one would have to pass if they were to reach the room they were in now. What was worrying him though, was the short amount of time between each beep. - Jenny_Hitt2yrCommented
*Two of them...
Nog, looked around him, he looked for anything to pick up and block the weapon. He could avoid one, but he could not avoid them all. Then, the sight of something red appeared in his vision. To off them spread wide. - Jenny_Hitt2yrCommented
Should it be squats instead of lunges?
"I heard that. Twenty push-ups, then you'll start the lunges again," he called without turning to look at her. - Jenny_Hitt2yrCommented
*without the fear
"Oh, it was ok." She could not help but feel glad that it was over. Although she did slightly feel excited with the experience, she still preferred a car, where she could ride comfortably with the fear of them ending up in a ditch somewhere. - Jenny_Hitt2yrCommented
*her son
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*bow down to what her future husband... *accept her for who she is.
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*revealing
"I'll live." Logan replied. His wounds on the outside had healed up from the little robots, but his ribs still hurt a little as he breathed in. He then walked over to the travelers and lifted up showing his wrist watch reavilling he was a level 8. - Jenny_Hitt2yrReplied to bishop1275
Yes, just a small one :) The spelling is very similar for the two numbers. Twentieth = 20th Twenty-eighth = 28th Loving the novel so far!!
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I thiught it was his 28th birthday??
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*There are...
"I don't think they'll kill him," Erin replied. "There, too many people here he would have to silence." - Jenny_Hitt2yrCommented
..killing their eighth lizard...
Berg and his group had just finished killed there eighth lizards and were currently resting for a bit. He needed some time to recover his MC points before he could use his abilities again. - Jenny_Hitt2yrCommented
...trying to think of an idea.
"The ability of fire, huh?" Vorden looked at the red-haired student for some time trying to think up of an idea.