I started reading and found myself at chapter 7. It truly captured my attention. Henderson is disgusting, I hope Cassey does not grow up like him.

I won't let you wonder for too long 😉

I love the story. Lisa is more frank than I expected, I like how clear the characters ideas are shown and the fast pace of the events. Shane seemed dark for real though. but Lisa should be wiser for her age, Lol

An interesting idea, and a strange plot so far. I think the paragraphs need short sentences and one can use the word (one) instead of he/she. Maybe you can add a bit of emotion to the characters in their time of crisis or when making hard choices. But so far, it's great on the science side, just try to put it in shorter sentences so the concept becomes clearer for your everyday readers. Go on!👍🏻😃

thanks for the advice ☺️. Really appreciate it

thank you 😊, I will!

somehow I like this cold, mysterious setting. the description is great.

told myself he's noble to the core

I want safety for everyone too 👌🏻😌 that's noble

I really like how fluently you draw the scenes with your words. It seems interesting at first sight. I'm gonna read a few chapters more

it's indeed a somewhat religious story, however the focus won't be religion in a way. Jacob is indeed installing good morality into his child. he had done so with his children. but don't rush events. we will see what happens next

thank you! I will update today or tomorrow 🌹😃

happy you got the feelings I tried to embody in my words, wait for more 🥰😉

thank you very much 🥰 I hope it reaches out to all🌹

I love karma

regardless you should have listened to your father. or you will be in trouble 🤣

nor stupidity suits you

love this name!

thank you 😊 I will work hard