I'll find a way around it. I'll learn and adapt, Thank you for such kind words. I appreciate it, sincerely.

Yeah! I was trying to work my way around it, but I guess I didn't shorten it enough ill take a day to readvise it.

The religious figures in the **book** are fictional

Religious figures are fictional, and the use of the word 'God' is used all the time. But I understand your concern but I had that in mind when writing.

The book "Re: live - Enigmatic Powerhouse with System" follows the journey of a character named Alex Matthew, who gains a new body and memories through a system after experiencing numerous lives. Through his newfound abilities, he sets out to enjoy life to the fullest while growing stronger and uncovering his past. The world of Gaia, filled with Raiders and Gates to other dimensions, provides a backdrop for Alex's adventures and struggles. In reviewing the book, I have identified some inconsistencies and errors in the text, such as spelling mistakes and occasional repetitive phrases. These issues can distract readers from fully engaging with the story. The narrative is intriguing, blending elements of fantasy, adventure, and mystery as Alex navigates his new life and powers. Overall, the premise of the book is promising, offering a mix of world-building, character development, and supernatural abilities. The concept of a system guiding the protagonist's journey and unlocking memories adds depth to the plot. The introduction of various bloodlines, skills, and titles provides a rich tapestry of powers for Alex to explore. However, the narrative could benefit from further polishing to enhance coherence and clarity, especially in terms of pacing and character motivations. The setting of a world teeming with monsters, Gates, and powerful abilities sets the stage for an epic tale of self-discovery and growth. In conclusion, "Re: live - Enigmatic Powerhouse with System" presents an intriguing premise with potential for engaging storytelling. With refinement in writing mechanics and a focus on character dynamics, this book has the foundation to captivate readers and deliver a thrilling journey through a fantastical realm.

That is the type of Honesty this app needs, the criticism that points out the things that needs change!, visually descriptive writing is not my strongest. And as for the dark part it's kind of slow but The main character Victoria is in conflict with herself as her past counterpart Artorias is beginning to make herself known. It'll become a fight between the two. That's just the beginning, I suppose I might have asked for my medicine to early. But I am trying to find a way to get past the whole "Victoria: says" and move into the "Blah blah yada yada said Victoria intently" type. The more i read the more I learn. The honesty is much appreciated your truly a Brother, a Brother Indeed!! When I ask people close to me or a stranger it's always the same. LIKE LET ME HAVE IT!!! people are way to nice. This is my dream job! I wanna get serious. Need the truth! You did me and my future a solid! [img=strong] I will grow from this!

THANK YOU!!! THAT IS THE PURE Honesty I needed! Now back to the drawing board! [img=strong] feedback I can work with! Much a appreciated you sir are good friend! A good friend indeed!

I don't even know if people read these reviews but I have a lot of passion for the Nibiru project. As known as Nibirius Souls today. I started back in 2017.

Greetings!, I'm the Author. As you can tell I'm inexperienced when it comes to writing, but I have a story to tell. I've download Grammarly premium. So expect a better writing quality. My vision for Nibirius Souls is a telling of more than one story but of a several. Inspired by Hidetaka Miyazaki's Games and George Raymond Richard Martin. My Biggest Inspiration is the grim reality of life. My life, growing up in a difficult environment, with difficult circumstances. Life didn't give me a chance. My optimism and my escape through fantasy that being Video Games or other source of media, which has kept me going. Turning every boring and dark moment in reality into a fantasy journey... "Too old for Games" "Too Old For Anime" where something I heard often. But it all sums up to me not liking my position in life. One thing I wish I knew in my younger days was not to give two shits about what people think. Here I am.. Self educated. A man standing before readers and writers. Asking you to give my book a chance. If you see (Unedited) in the chapters. Save my book it in your collections and come back. I promise, you ill get it done. The fantastic epic of a tournament of reincarnationed Mains and Sides fighting to the death.. Follow My Big Bad Artorias's journey to becoming the Last Boss. Because your worst enemy is truly yourself..

My bad, I read it as "except for one"

A small typo?

Your writing is pretty damn, good and descriptive!, there is the random mistake like "Save for one" went my mind read "Except for one" but it's done really well, I like where it's leading

War on man has an excellent start. The descriptive writing made it easy to be immersed. Safe to say, im excited to see the development.

clearly descriptive writing, I'm very intrigued by the monsters. Now excuse me, shall continue!

Lord Gold never fails to amaze me [img=update]

Thank you! My growth has a lot to do with reading your guys' work, I don't just see you guys as authors, but as mentors.

DaoistOfReading, you were completely right, I'm immersed, sucked into the book. it is a gift and curse finding a good book. I'll enjoy the heck out of your work, and for a moment, put down something important. [img=recommend]

Okay, I'm 100 percent Invested. [img=recommend]

The amount of vivid detail.. Poetry!

Yeah, a Balance in a system is important!, It been familiar makes it easier to understand, You're good, Brother, keep writing!