With all of the description of what was being done to the poor young man, why would you blot out this word? It dilutes what the rescuer/friend is screaming right now. Rape. If you're going to describe it and use other profanity, then use the word.

Interesting premise. I would have loved to have read more

It's not a good thing to attract deities attention, is it? You die in the very first test 😂😂 It'll be interesting to see the fight.

Aww, good to see you touch on these things. I brought it up in the last chapter, and I guess I should have waited to comment until reading this one. 😂 It'll be interesting to see the solution.

Yep, something was a little off with Ronaldo...

Nice

Ha, ha... becoming a little less human as the time wears on.... (Change your body give up your heart give up your soul... give up control to the voices in your head...I digress, lol) Now if there's a creepy ghost not like the others, I would say maybe try attacking the creepy ghost. I'll bet he's the one actually at fault. At first, I thought he wasn't like the universe cuz he hadn't been there as long. But as Link grew suspicious, I changed my mind. Quick call the Ghostbusters! 🤣

Is it the end for Link/Red? Will his soul rot there like all who've come before? Stay tuned! (Inventive plot line exclamation can't wait to see what he might think of to get out of this one!)

Creepy! Good job!

Interesting chapter! I can't wait to see or hear who's talking!; I also noticed that you called him Red - after so many chapters not using the name you might confuse readers. Small grammar error: weary : means tired. Wary means cautious. 🙂 Easy to confuse them.

Good chapters.

Hopefully he won't get his team killed in the name of "training." A good leader also knows when he needs to step in, especially when he hasn't lifted a finger yet. Besides I'm starting to like these people - which probably isn't good since the secondary characters all seem to die 😂

Nice chapter. Just a small error - if she had been held for six years, Ariel would have been 21 when she was freed not 19. Otherwise nice work.

Still reading

The ending of this one is slightly confusing. You might want to add a little explanation for readers who may have forgotten what 'games' are being referred to.

Nice action in this chapter and the last.

Nice chapter

Interesting story from Adrian. Wondering where this is going...

I like the chapter!

Nice to see you updating!