Chaotic_Reader_Cy2

good story for me.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

the reason it drop is probably the update. it's too slow for them so they wanna save it until it's high enough for them to enjoy

the Mc is kinda stupid I mean his immune to physical related attacks when at a certain speed but he can't understand his direction right? doesn't that mean he just needs to be a nuke? or a falling meteor 😂 that's an nuke if you as me. as for the femboy related stuff if ever get reincarnated as a femboy i rather be a hung femboy rather than a btch one with a small dck 😂

I can give you a simple solution for the power scaling 😂 just make it a comedy if the Mc strength is too powerful just make it an absurd comedy. simple example I've had Soo far is Minecraft in Warhammer 40k with mods lol 😂 or the Crazy Dave in konoka/Naruto LOL 😂 the power scale is too absurdly high that an character death and revive is just fine like who's going to stop them? the whole ancestors family are in konoha and not adding the internet and other addiction of all tail beast and with all the time travel absurdity may as well write happy ending at the start. not adding the good son black zitsu with the gang of white zitsus playing with shit with the zombies. kinda reminds me black Zitsu wasn't cruel and shameful enough. he could have taken all villages leaders and women hostage with their blood as for who? the cult immortal guy of course.

it's fine this ending is already great than more I've read so far except story with after storys's

sad It would have been O.P if Mc picked other characters 😂 and it's not even that bad the bad part is actually not being an novel author 😔 Mc can easily get emotions points if she makes books of healing 😂😂😂😂😂

oh yeah author found your DC gacha but instead of emotions to draw it's achievement but it's not that far off. but it's pure comedy try it out. the name it's just Dc gacha i think it's at chapter 80+

Let's go! 😂 more please and this story is nice 👍🙂👍

great story and odd I keep forgetting to rate this novel

more please and I'll just rate this to max before a forget about it again