Great novel, story line has been developed well as plot constantly changing and evolving. perfect balance between development of characters and introduction of new characters.

it's good but you need to improve upon spelling

great novel

Why an umbrella?

thanks

By the way Draken_Phenix are you male or female as it may affect the plot or story line and I can develop it in different way's

Guess who's the character coming next chapter he just want's moooooorrrrrreeee

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I thought id make you into a phoenix who always want's moooooorrrrrreeee

i made a character for you Draken Phenix hope you like it sorry if it isn't ok yet

Great chapter

Thanks i'll take this onboard

not fully sure yet 50/50 atm if you have a preference that will probably make me go one way or another

sorry I'm not doing great but if anyone has any ideas on what they want please say and ill try to fit it in

can't wait till next chapter

many thanks do you have any suggestions in which way I should take the novel?

I dont think I will go for a harem but I'm not sure so I'm 50/50 atm

thanks for the suggestions the reason is I just dont want him to have too many op techniques i plan to gradually add them in as for training rooms they will be included but not very early on. many thanks for your suggestions

it did as well as later on in the novel type of whale

whale filters Qi energy and purifies and condenses it and can swallow objects and flesh and blood to boost Li Chu's cultivation as I said earlier in the novel but thanks' for asking i may need to literate on this point