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Jesse_Morris_9494

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2021-05-15 JoinedUnited States
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
    Jesse_Morris_94946d
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    Why him!
    The Clan Master Can't possibly Be A Mortal
    Eastern · Chaotic Winter Melon Essence
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    4 words?

    Looking at the honest and straightforward Shi Lei, four words suddenly popped into their minds: pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger.
    The Clan Master Can't possibly Be A Mortal
    Eastern · Chaotic Winter Melon Essence
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    Bu Feilan from the Scarlet Serpent Sect felt as though he had collided with a wall; countless ribs snapped, and he was sent flying out like a kite with its string cut, crashing heavily beyond the platform.
    The Clan Master Can't possibly Be A Mortal
    Eastern · Chaotic Winter Melon Essence
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    "Don't you dare bring me into this. My mind is not as dirty as yours..." the system's voice rang in his head as Zeras rolled his eyes.
    Chaos Devourer System
    Action · Supreme_IQ
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    Why are you doing this again? Starting a new chapter with the ending paragraphs of the previous chapter? Thought we were past this. smh.

    "Have you ridden a horse before?" Undying Narelle asked, as Zeras regained his composure and puffed out his chest.
    Chaos Devourer System
    Action · Supreme_IQ
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    Colin was running non-stop, and so did the rhinoceros behind him!
    Mage Academy: I Have Infinite Skill Points
    Fantasy · Half-Fated Sir
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    🤣

    Immediately, the poor birdie's trousers were blown into ash, exposing the ruddy red butt and then...
    Chaos Devourer System
    Action · Supreme_IQ
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    Evil minion made me do a spit take. I do love the Systems since of humor. 🤣

    [Yes? My evil minion...]
    Chaos Devourer System
    Action · Supreme_IQ
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    This paragraph has been deleted.
    My Bio-Nanotech System
    Action · Supreme_IQ
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
    Jesse_Morris_94941mth
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    I swear, if I see the word Khan one more time....

    Unfortunately, Khan didn't pay any attention to her or the group, only giving them a side-glance before turning their attention towards the two cats who remained in the same state.
    Chaos Devourer System
    Action · Supreme_IQ
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    I'm so sick of seeing, 'Khan'. Stop mixing up novels.

    "Hehehe, let me show off a little..." Khan mused to himself and instantly, he smashed on the nitro button as he grabbed hold of the controller and did an absolute full turn.
    Chaos Devourer System
    Action · Supreme_IQ
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
    Jesse_Morris_94942mth
    Posted

    This is becoming beyond annoying. Please use a Find/Replace function to remove the name Khan. You're swapping it for Zeras and other characters. It jarring and is ruining the reading experience.

    Chaos Devourer System
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    🤣

    "You damn snake, you left your lonely father here alone without even ever given a call at all. You're so heartless..." Veurnech said as his hands clamped tightly on Vornek's head and he drilled his knock on Vornek's head whose legs dangled helplessly in the air.
    Chaos Devourer System
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    You're switching up the names. This is Vornek, not Quinn.

    "I'm finally home..." Quinn muttered to himself as he looked at the gigantic golden planet in front of them.
    Chaos Devourer System
    Action · Supreme_IQ
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
    Jesse_Morris_94942mth
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    Chaos Devourer System
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
    Jesse_Morris_94943mth
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    My second review. Who the hell is Khan, and why does the author keep swapping this name for another characters name? Makes it hard as hell to figure out who is who. They sometimes change Zeras to Khan or use Khan in the same sentence for multiple people so you have no idea what is going on.

    Chaos Devourer System
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    Commented

    Same paragraphs are repeated 3 or 4 times!!! #RipOff

    Ch 226 Secret Of The Kratos Family
    Chaos Devourer System
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
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    Same paragraph from above. This author does too much word padding.

    "The Art of Unlocking the Power of Limiters is a forbidden art even in the upper realms! As for how you were able to get your hands on such an art, it truly surprises me. Anyone with the art would be able to easily raise a vast expanse of extremely powerful soldiers. I have really been given quite the shock today from you low-lives..."
    Chaos Devourer System
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
    Jesse_Morris_94944mth
    Commented
    The lightning generator arc was a power source that delivered electricity for those on the 10th to the 20th floor, completely powering all their knees.
    Chaos Devourer System
    Action · Supreme_IQ
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  • Jesse_Morris_9494
    Jesse_Morris_94944mth
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    I like the character and the Interfaces attitude it gives. It totally could be a anime character. I find myself smiling, laughing and engrossed in it. The only draw back is the 'padding' of the chapters. Each chapter repeats 1-3 paragraphs of the ending previous chapter. So I feel it's a bit of a scam since we have to pay by chapter or in bulk. They seriously need to change that immediately.

    Chaos Devourer System
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