TheAverage_Otaku

No cap I like the way you introduced Tukiya. Big ups!!

Ight so regarding the premise its really solid and can go places if handled well, also I like the fact that your giving little mysteries in the first volume that will act as a foundation to future events or plot twists. I also like the fact that your giving a considerable amount of lore to some of the characters so that at least we the readers would want to know more about the characters instead of flat plot devices. Overall I think the story has potential (again if handled well), I'm actually impressed by how much lore you've put behind the story which has me wanting to read more and know where the story will end up. Cool stuff bro better than the trash I've seen people make in my class😂 I'd give it a 4/5 so far👌🏾