Bonita_Wicher_6246
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2021-05-16 JoinedUnited States
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The story line in captivating ; the error in grammer should be corrected before publication. I almost thought i had been sent to another book at one point and it took reading a couple of pages since the story line shifted its focus - possibly naming the Chapters better or having the name of the book in small print Would have eased the confusion
Suddenly Irene shifted her gaze and looked right at Klara. The looked in her eyes sent a shiver down Klara's spine. - Bonita_Wicher_62462yrCommentedCh 4 Chapter 4
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So are edIts corrected ?
"Come one then I will take you to your rooms." - Bonita_Wicher_62462yrCommented
Stop
"Why do you want to top the sex trade?"