Juan_Alanis

Now he's six is this written by Ai?

I think my reading is terrible I thought this was Year - 4 hows he Six, he was 3 years earlier

Its good, I like it nothing much else to say but I do recommend it.

I here to motivate you also this is pretty good you gave reasons why he isn't interfering which I like so it makes sense why he wouldn't deal with madara and stuff. I would give you ideas if I wasn't so stupid so your on your own.

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I dropped at chapter 11 I would read more but reading this feels like reading the same chapter over and over he keeps talking about micro adjustments, refining, observing and all that stuff like he hasn't said it through every chapter and then at the end of each chapter he talks about how he's not strong enough and then he says after that this world is gonna be his playground (it feels like ai ngl)

I like the story and the comedy so I totally recommended for others to read this.

you know kong isn't to bad this one should stay its easy to say and remember at least compared to other chinese names

*akk is supossed to be ALL

I like it but there are 2 major points that I don't like and its First, the Chinese names there are quite a bit(zonglian, tianzang, quanye, zouxiu, xingzhi, kong, and wu'an) and places (Taihang and, congyun) this is from chapter 1 to chapter 15. Second, the young master and lord, brother and uncle are all chinese terms used a lot, but the suffixes -sama, -dono, -san, and -kun (-chan too) should be used instead. The translation is good I haven't seen any mistakes but i kinda have terrible eye sight. All in all it isn't bad just needs some things swapped and I'm still gonna read it even with akk the chinese stuff.