Fat_lightning96

full of plot holes, the chapters repeat info,the system makes almost no sense and the author seems to have forgot the most basic powers of sayians.

love a lot about this story but way to much of a AU for me. Ill give it a few more chapters but i think this is where i stop.

what happend? plz dont stop updating this story

is a chapter missing?

+1

to be real its making it hard to keep reading its like he is just getting handed everthing and with no info on where this knowlege is coming from the chapters feel so empty like each chapter is just a progress report of the end of training with no build up.

is the story dead???? i need more!!!

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nothing new and kinda boring, fell apart when he got to hogwarts had to drop

repeat sentence