lazY_b0nes

raw please! the story is awesome but i need moreeeeee

The word count is too low and the plot is skewered through to show off the mc's powers. The execution of plot and powers along with the description of scenes are too amateur. The whole thing looks quite childish but for a new author it's commendable. Hope he keeps grinding to one day write a masterpiece.

handsome he was...

that would look comical to say the least...

fire and dark.... why not try fiendfyre??? gellert would be proud.

CoMC is a third yr course!!!

try explaining to me how an eagle owl can perch on an 11 yr old's shoulder.... just google it... it's a damn huge bird...

Who else??

Roger Approves!!