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no, he unlocked 3, and realized there were 4 more after that.
Maybe. I'm trying to get rid of the 'game elements' I had put in earlier in the book, similar to what I did to Pill-Splitting Qi. So, If I can find some sort of explanation for this thing that will make sense under both contexts, then I can keep it going and even find a way to improve it.
The ability to improve recipes was for Common rank pills back when he reached True Realm. also, almost all of the pills he's making here are ones whose recipe he's already improved. he's doing a half-hearted job at it all, which is why the results aren't as good as they should be.
might want to change 'Luke' to 'the young man' here. Not the best way to reveal the MCs name. the next para is better.
This is my review after more than a year of writing this book. I will start by saying that this is not my best work, but one that is very fun to write, and from the comments I receive, it is quite fun to read as well. This is not an action-packed story with very high tension and suspense, so don’t expect that. It is more than anything a Slice of life. This is a story about a man who turned into energy and can no longer die. As a result, he goes around the world, the galaxies, and eventually the multiverse to see new things and visit new places. You will see all types of power systems, all types of stories, not just Eastern Fantasy as I idiotically put it up as. There’s cultivation, magic, summoning, space adventure, and will be many more things. In addition, I wish to answer a few questions and clear some confusion/ hatred. Q. Why did you turn him into a Human? That beats the premise of the story being about a Non-human MC. A. I didn’t turn him into a human, he was always meant to be one. I never intended to write a non-human MC to begin with when the idea first popped into my head. Still, in a sense, he’s still not a human and never will be. ****** Q. Why is the MC dumb/ not intelligent? A. When I started, I didn’t even know how to write a mediocre MC, let alone one with a brain. So I decided to go with an easy choice that will let me do some exposition without making it an info dump. So, basically, it was because I wasn’t very good at writing in general. ***** Q. Why are the first 100 or so chapters bad? A. When I started writing the book, I had 0 hope of continuing it. I was already writing another book I had started just a month ago, so I didn’t pay much attention to it. I gave this book maybe an hour at most to simply write a chapter and no other time to think of the plot. As a result, the first 100 chapters are some of the worst chapters I have ever written. I only started caring because it ended up being quite a bit popular amongst the readers. ***** Q. Why does the MC not jump in a volcano and sleep for a million years? A. I get this question a lot, even though it is explained. He cannot just sleep forever. There is a high chance of losing energy instead of gaining it when he sleeps. Besides, he likes meeting new people and seeing the world. ****** Q. Why does the MC care about humans? A. Why not? He was a human too, and in some way, he still is one. If you are looking for a cold MC, or anti-hero MC, this is not it. Just because he’s an immortal, he isn’t immediately apathetic to everything around him. ***** I hope you can read past the first 100 chapters, and maybe even enjoy them. If you cannot, that’s understandable as well. Thank you for reading the book either way.
it's like the difference between a cat and a tiger. same same, but different.
Valid criticism. I myself think the book only gets better after 400 chapters and really good after 600, but I can see why no one would want to stick around for that long. The slow pacing and such are my fault for being a new author and not knowing how to write a story without showing every little detail. If I could have readers skip chapters to read ahead, I would. but there is too much foreshadowing in the 100-400 chapters that I just can't have them skip. So, thanks for reading at least 300 chapters I guess, and sorry you didn't like it.
Then he'll have to live in that body forever. The moment the beast body dies, she gets teleported back to where she was summoned from. Besides, she will have no freedom or growth if she is summoned like this.