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I am writing the outline right now and then once I am done I am going to go back to releasing. I just needed to write my plans down so I can reduce any possible plot holes before I got too far in. I will say that I plan on releasing two or three chapters at once when I come back
Not Quite, But I can't spoil more then that sadly
Hey man, thank you for the tips this is my first time writing and I appreciate the notes. I think I need to fix the synopsis to make what you can expect from the story clearer. I also appreciate the grammar notes and I will go back and rework those chapters to fix the grammar. I hope you have a good day.
Hmm, for merging stuff into his race, I was going to go in a bit of a different direction from that but he will do something sorta similar as merging things into himself once he gets further into the story. Although there will be more ritual shenanigans later on as well
Likely more since this is a book that seems like it’ll be about the MC moving between hundreds of worlds
I’m assuming that if evolution works like other monster novels then he will probably regain the arm when he evolves
I’m gonna be sad if bret ever dies because I love his and Blake’s bromance
Do the dragons have fated ones too?
Id argue when that secret has almost killed you, its better for someone who is extremely loyal to know
Theres a manga where a healer uses this idea to gain inhuman strength, definitely one of the more unique healing magic ideas ive seen
Didn’t she know about him though? I thought that’s what she meant when asking about her ‘senpai’?
All I can think of is cantrips from dnd when it says level 0
Now im imagining him after the story ends just hearing about some bad guy and shooting an arrow in the sky before it kills the poor villain before he even knew what happened
Especially since he can assume shang will keep using the same technique to gain power, making more like what soran fears
Maybe kinetic energy? Since kinetic energy is what controls temperature, maybe it absorbs kinetic ’mana’ into the arm creating a vacuum where ice mana fills in?
My guess is its an illusion