The story is very good. I love the chemistry between Liam and Ryan. I also enjoyed the amount of detail in the story. Looking forward for more chapters.

the story has started picking up the pace

this is certainly one of my favourites

nice work, I think the cliffhanger could've been better. Just leave the last one out.

Very interesting, I like that the story progresses quickly but at the same time describes the world, the history, the setting as well. I'm waiting for more chapters and keep up the amazing work.