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Jack_Dimmock

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  • Jack_Dimmock
    Jack_Dimmock1yr
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    Whilst there were chapters that I skipped over and the info dump of how the magic system worked was poor, I super enjoyed how everything else was explained. The kingdom building is spectacular from tech to admin. Best introduction to finance schemes in world building for a noob. I liked the individuality of some side characters, but at the cost of their conclusions.

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    Release That Witch
    Fantasy · Er Mu
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  • Jack_Dimmock
    Jack_Dimmock2yr
    Commented

    Roland seems to be the only one who knows how to utilize a witch's ability, but now to have someone so out of the loop come up with a sonogram. This is progress

    She was pregnant.
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    Release That Witch
    Fantasy · Er Mu
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  • Jack_Dimmock
    Jack_Dimmock2yr
    Commented

    Of the wise words of Jon Snow, 'we can't effectively defend the North with half the population.' and all combat witches are female. WHEN is ROLAND going to MAKE a WOMEN'S PLATOON. Even if it's only a thousand women to the seven thousand men.

    "Mother said that father used to be a common hunter. She never expected him to gain such an honor after death. She told me to thank you if I ever got the chance to meet you." Jasmine deeply bowed to May. "Now people call me the daughter of a hero, which makes me feel that father actually didn't leave me. If not for the rule that the First Army doesn't take in females, I'd have carried a flintlock and fought against those hostile enemies."
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    Release That Witch
    Fantasy · Er Mu
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  • Jack_Dimmock
    Jack_Dimmock2yr
    Replied to Jack_Dimmock

    while Roland is in the bunker naked with three naked Annas

    If Zero had not "personally witnessed" it, she would never have imagined that snow powder weapons could be so powerful.
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    Release That Witch
    Fantasy · Er Mu
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  • Jack_Dimmock
    Jack_Dimmock2yr
    Commented

    All I'm imagining is Zero taken off guard as Roland steps down in a conjured underground bunker, only to be ripped apart, burned and poisoned rapidly from a nuke. That'll shave off a few dozen lives.

    If Zero had not "personally witnessed" it, she would never have imagined that snow powder weapons could be so powerful.
    altalt
    Release That Witch
    Fantasy · Er Mu
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  • Jack_Dimmock
    Jack_Dimmock2yr
    Commented

    "eXploration, eXpansion, eXploitation, Extermination", is a phanominal line I wish I was writing something so appropriate for a spider army tactics game. Already I feel that this is on-par with the Overlord anime. I desperately hope you continue writing more. thanks

    Ch 2 Confirmation of the Situation
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    Spider Queen from another world
    Fantasy · BaconWolf8923
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  • Jack_Dimmock
    Jack_Dimmock2yr
    Commented

    I love the idea of controlling how the word gets out about using witches. How to say "I, the prince will utilize the enemy's power for my people, in various ways from; production, military, industrial and in this case medical". Good isekai is when you bring medieval fantasy to medieval steampunk fantasy.

    Ch 43 Be Strong
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    Release That Witch
    Fantasy · Er Mu
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