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Whilst there were chapters that I skipped over and the info dump of how the magic system worked was poor, I super enjoyed how everything else was explained. The kingdom building is spectacular from tech to admin. Best introduction to finance schemes in world building for a noob. I liked the individuality of some side characters, but at the cost of their conclusions.
Roland seems to be the only one who knows how to utilize a witch's ability, but now to have someone so out of the loop come up with a sonogram. This is progress
Of the wise words of Jon Snow, 'we can't effectively defend the North with half the population.' and all combat witches are female. WHEN is ROLAND going to MAKE a WOMEN'S PLATOON. Even if it's only a thousand women to the seven thousand men.
while Roland is in the bunker naked with three naked Annas
All I'm imagining is Zero taken off guard as Roland steps down in a conjured underground bunker, only to be ripped apart, burned and poisoned rapidly from a nuke. That'll shave off a few dozen lives.
"eXploration, eXpansion, eXploitation, Extermination", is a phanominal line I wish I was writing something so appropriate for a spider army tactics game. Already I feel that this is on-par with the Overlord anime. I desperately hope you continue writing more. thanks
I love the idea of controlling how the word gets out about using witches. How to say "I, the prince will utilize the enemy's power for my people, in various ways from; production, military, industrial and in this case medical". Good isekai is when you bring medieval fantasy to medieval steampunk fantasy.