amazing twist the prey turns predator

dont drop most of us just like to bulk read i my self just saved up35 chapters to read together

Awesome chapter and the usual trope is to capture sirius after he has escaped and give him some veratisium or something

Nothing bad to say great decision to change the name makes the character feel more unique however less arse licking from females would be highly preferable overall tho 4/5

Maybe a more explorative arc eg mc travelling to the icy north or maybe the fire region

The green hair is the same as dugu bo so it makes sense

Damn if you don't like it don't read it I quite happen to see this as a fresh perspective and scenario

Like the new image

Wish I was 5 1 at 11 and not 5 3 at 17

Either of them could be a natural gift

Was expecting astoria to be in there as part of the elixir thing she falls in love la la la

Agreed losing a few times aids character development

@mr author Harry potter and the blood of the dragon is a nice read

Ignore the distasteful once I'm having a fun school skiving read

Cockatrice look cool af don't know if they'll be in your universe or not tho

Is axel blaze inspired by inazuma 11 axel

As a d n d er I can affirm its a 1d8 for the ¼ staff

Ooooh he might be right tho the princess' death was said to be premeditated by the queen

Rip her maj

wow put the wrong right lol meant write haha. I admire you feel being so passionate in your writing. to be or not to be life is a huge question eh (at 15 rn love Reading- also a passion for maths- but struggle to hold a story line on a plot when I'm writing it just goes haywire do right now I'm searching for my perfect vibe). enjoy your day!!