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Pls tell me this is a joke or a misunderstanding u intreduse a loving father who is married as the protagonist and then make this a harem. U are a disgusting person athour pls stop poluting this world and go fuck ur mother though thinking about it u probably alredy have. i mean this from the bortom of my heart hang urself so the people you love dont have to live arou d u u disgusting deformed whore of a man dont have children in the future u poision the entire gene pool and will probably torture whatever soul happends to be stuck with u dont continu life die and never ever tuch a pen again
Please remove romance tag it dose not belong with harem have some respect for ur self and stop disgracing these tags u want to write a shitty porno for teanagers and romance usualy includes caracter developement but u are making a harem story/written porno scene nothing more. Advise for the future stop writing possibly distance ur self from society so we dont have to see u again thx
Then im not reading if u take even a second of hesitation it points ro u being a horrible writer and ur story will most likely be lack luster to say the least. Harem only takes away from the story and caracters its a sad exscuse for bad writers to attracht horny teanagers to jerk off over their horrible atrrocity of a novel
Author why did u ruin the story evelyn is the worst caracter kill her off now ur going to loose viewers u alredy fucked up nobody wanted rex with evelyn and nobody wants to read this kinda story setting with harem u horny bitch. I sincerily hope u die for ruining this novel just to satisfy ur tiny perverted mangled cock
Author this book started out really well but with ur horribible writing getting the better of u the story keeps getting worse. I have never in my life wanted to smash my phone out of anger but u really managed to ruin this perfectly fine story with ur horny as personality. First of harem stories never make it to a good book and evelyn please im begging u to kill her of shes such a shit caracter i never thaught sombody can make a worse caracter than joffrey from game of thrones but u did it and its not a well written bad person but a horribly written one i hope u put this book down or fix it because it had so much potential