19Ninety5th

"the system" = author

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the dialogue feels generic, maybe even artificial. it is way too optimistic and bubbly, that it's become obnoxious. anyway, i was intrigued at the start and chose tonstick around hoping to find somtething to cling on. but down the line i often find myself skimming and skipping through the chaps as it's mostly descriptive(when he's developing games). the antagonism towards the mc is kinda forced. and it's also riddled with convenient events imo. every new character that was introduced was either with him or against him, quite predictable. no problems with the reading experience though(grammar, etc), as I suspect it ran through an AI software before it was uploaded here.

caution! face slapping eminent!