I am writing this review early, however I hope the author ends up seeing this. The pacing is very consistent, and I do like some of the vocabulary and literary devices used. The plot is strong from the beginning, as is quick at the action and thrill, which is a nice starter to utilize the plot as a method to reveal the worldbuilding. I do feel like some phrases could be reworded, and sometimes the writing is a bit unprofessional, if the author is really serious in writing this novel. I think it is better if you write in a way that is more concise and fluid, rather than using closed or foreign words if you want a fluid translation, but ultimately that is up to you. To address the biggest problem, your tense. Sometimes I see you write verbs such as 'don't' instead of 'doesn't', and you can confuse yourself with present tense and past tense when recounting events and just the story-line in general. Here is my constructive criticism, if you don't like what I'm saying then just tell me, but I am here to give advise. (For context though, I do exert the same energy as the other reviews.)

This is one of the very few novels I enjoy reading on the web. The story is fresh, I love the critical thinking of the protagonist, the worldbuilding is amazing and detailed.... and in particular, enjoy your writing style! You have potential, keep it up :)

Shouldn't have torn the film.... idiots.

What? NOW you think of it? ):

Cute? Cute??? boi, you really falling for the illusion. did you forget that he's a sociopathic animal abuser? sick.

Dissect him with his guts and organs spilling about... drain him of his blood and give him multiple stab wounds. relocate his heart.

At least refrain from giving any indication of sorts. I thought you said you were going to be super careful for the first half of the year...

This MC is irritating...

Well, you better be. Get a grip of the situation here. You're literally going to your demise in a yandere otome game. Be a little more harsh or your kindness will be your own death. Move out of the country or something... geez.

Yeah, but *how* are you going to prevent feelings? Geez, brave up and be smarter MC.