Subhajit_Saha_6593

Lv12

2021-05-14 JoinedIndia

165.7h

of reading

91

Read books

Badges

8

Moments

5

Subhajit_Saha_65934 months ago
Commented
It should be sentence not surface.
"You can go to manager Ma Ning, I will call you If I need you for something." The old man vanished from the room before she could even finish her surface.
Getting a Sugar Mommy in Cultivation World!!
Eastern · Odayaka
Subhajit_Saha_65937 months ago
Commented
It should be "loud and intense".
"What's the matter? Did you not sleep well? Perhaps something load and intense kept you up? I don't know what that could be. By the time Alex and I were done with our little exercise, I was so exhausted that I basically just passed out!"
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister
Subhajit_Saha_65937 months ago
Commented
It should be "supply of *oxygen to the brain"
He wrapped one arm behind her neck, making sure the blade of his wrist was pressed against her spine, where then grabbed his other biceps with said hand. From there, he wrapped his other forearm against the woman's trachea and began to squeeze. Cutting off the supply of brain to her brain, while he pounded her virgin cunt with his large and erect cock.
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister
Subhajit_Saha_65932 years ago
Commented
??????
{Karma Points: 279,100}
Reincarnated As The Strongest Ancestor With a System
Eastern · Dark_Crow1111
Subhajit_Saha_65932 years ago
Commented
Better than mc
DEX: 40
Void Evolution System
Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead