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Mayank_Kumar_9274

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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92742h
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    😂

    Lu Yang squatted down, looking from one axe to the next. Then he looked up at the River Spirit as if he was an idiot, with a pitiful expression "Two of these axes are yours, and you don't even know which two they are, and yet you're asking me?"
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    Who Let Him Cultivate?!
    Eastern · The Whitest Crow
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92742h
    Commented

    😂

    Meng Jingzhou was extremely angry. What on earth was a Single Body Spiritual Root? Did it mean he had to stay single for his whole life?
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    Who Let Him Cultivate?!
    Eastern · The Whitest Crow
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92742h
    Commented

    😧

    Dai Bufan responded nonchalantly, "Oh, it's nothing. That 'beneficient expert' was me. I was in a rush at the time and forgot to leave my name after saving him."
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    Who Let Him Cultivate?!
    Eastern · The Whitest Crow
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_927422h
    Commented

    kill the one asking first

    "What will you do if you were in a situation where someone give you the choice to save yourself or save someone you care about?".
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92741d
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    are all men in these novel sissies and braindead?

    "Yes, he is certainly different to other men I have seen on my life, when he was in front of that Jolbaris idiot I carefully judged his expressions and he didn't even flinch a bit, although he knew Erin and me were there, even Archmages feel intimidated by just being in the presence of a half emperor, it's only natural... but this child instead looked as if he was ready to fight until the end if needed while constantly lookig at us, like he was more worried about us than him, and yet…".
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    Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92743d
    Posted

    Author there is too much sex scenes in recent hundred chapters can't focus on the plot and also add some more action!!!

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    The Conquerors Path
    Fantasy · Chaosking
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92746d
    Commented

    you should reference to SUPER GENE or LET ME GAME IN PEACE for how to write fighting scenes

    It may have sounded easy, but to fight ten monsters of the same rank as you and defeating them in such an overwhelming manner, is no small feat. (I am a newbie author and don't know how to write a proper fighting scene so cut me some slack, will you.)
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    Reborn as an Extra
    Sci-fi · Calm_Mountains
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92746d
    Commented

    😎

    "If you are unsatisfied then transfer even more money in my account." (Rio)
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    Reborn as an Extra
    Sci-fi · Calm_Mountains
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92746d
    Commented

    I remembered doreamon 🥺

    Starting that high-tech 3d printer, he made himself a tea out of thin air. (This world is extremely high-tech...)
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    Reborn as an Extra
    Sci-fi · Calm_Mountains
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92746d
    Replied to Mayank_Kumar_9274

    I was considering where to read or not and here you go spoil it all 😕

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    Constructing-Style Wizard
    Games · Books Cooked By Hearts
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92746d
    Replied to EmptyTaoist

    don't spoil 😠

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    Constructing-Style Wizard
    Games · Books Cooked By Hearts
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92747d
    Posted

    MC is too passive he should use his knowledge more appropriately and I don't like the 'original bitch female mc' spreading her legs whenever she encounter problems and even his 'loyal junior sister' has similer tendencies and antagonist(female mc) is dumb other than her bullshitt luck and similarly mc is also passive and muddleheaded

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    I Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation Novel
    Eastern · Countless Cold Autumn In Dreams
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92748d
    Commented

    👍🏻

    It wasn't that Ximen Jianyi had awakened some strange attribute, such as being willing to share Su Yier with others. It was just that Ximen Jianyi's possessiveness was too strong, and he had turned evil. He wanted to split Su Yier into pieces and make a perfect corpse.
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    I Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation Novel
    Eastern · Countless Cold Autumn In Dreams
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92749d
    Commented

    💀🤡

    Later, the Devil Supreme fell in love with Su Yier, giving her the magic treasures refined by her two junior sisters.
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    I Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation Novel
    Eastern · Countless Cold Autumn In Dreams
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92749d
    Commented

    😂

    Fang Jinyu quivered and thought, "She looks as innocent as a little white flower and speaks like an angelic bitch…."
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    I Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation Novel
    Eastern · Countless Cold Autumn In Dreams
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_92749d
    Replied to BloodySiren

    😂

    If Things Go as Expected, He Will Meet an Accident
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    I Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation Novel
    Eastern · Countless Cold Autumn In Dreams
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_927416d
    Commented

    Well if author really wants MC to ace at archery he should reference from SUPER GENE though not much it's at least many times better than author's

    Ch 109 Chapter 109-The Seth Hunt(2)
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    The Conquerors Path
    Fantasy · Chaosking
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_927417d
    Replied to ShadowSamurai_69

    I don't remember anything like that which chap?

    But that was just the beginning, soon the rest started kneeling to me in a circle, this time the hearts of those who saw it shook, be it the teachers, students or those who were watching in secret, all of them felt a chill up their body
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    The Conquerors Path
    Fantasy · Chaosking
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_927417d
    Commented

    rest of the audience🙄

    Both of them shouted my name out loud, turning my head I could see, two fox tribe girls walking towards me, both Rika and Mika had grown up well, Rika had her white hair tied in a pony tail, her hight was average while her face was beautiful, her moderate assets was covered by her dress, while her white tail swung sideways due to excitement
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    The Conquerors Path
    Fantasy · Chaosking
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  • Mayank_Kumar_9274
    Mayank_Kumar_927417d
    Commented

    I was expecting super battle and goddess doing some trick

    Everybody saw a scene of a man leading the army, everybody saw the scene of soldier's protecting their home, their life, their family by their scarifies, even some weak willed students started crying in the stadium
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    The Conquerors Path
    Fantasy · Chaosking
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