I actually like how Op the Mc is, because I don't have a problem with a character being Op I have I problem with how most series handle the Opness (😏) so I hope you handle it correctly

Personally I would have chose a system that allowed me to get the powers of any char that dealt with the concept death and one of the essences.

Definitely cooked with this one. keep up the with and don't drop.

Yes please

I'm definitely biased because I was looking for a komi fic, but I don't care. Keep up the good work, and don't drop

The Story is really good and I like how it's not moving slow, but the main problem I have is that there is too many abilities and things going on. I suggest mixing most of the fire abilities into simply "fire manipulation" and moving a bit slower

The idea is very intriguing and I'd like to see a full story, but the writing quality is sub par at best. some ways to fix this is by making the dialog and character pov separate paragraphs, and try to make paragraphs shorter or split them.

Thanks for the chapter 🙏