king_bear

just a hiatus for the time being

a nice 9/10 story the pacing and story development are amazing and the twists and turns are top-notch now on to my main thought on the story main relationship is just bad. when Adam was fighting back against Cat was the best part of the story but every time it would always loop back to him being madly in "love" even after she broke both of his hands to the point of them being non-functional and getting him severely addicted to drugs. we the readers are meant to Believe that Adam wouldn't kill her in her sleep, like the main villain of the final arc was doing the same thing that Cat was doing to Adam but without the money and luxury and last but not least the fact that GOD was gaslighting him to make him believe that Cat was everything he wanted was by far one of the worst things to read. overall the story is amazing, for all my complaints about the main relationship I still like this book and would highly recommend anybody give it a read PS shout out Connor he a real one frfr

to go into more detail Vincent just wants to be happy so if he finds a job he likes he will pursue it but if not he may just be a stay at home dad, its's just too early for him in story to decide at the moment so he plans to finish college then figure it out. as for the older sister i may post a poll to let you dudes vote on who the MC should be with but i will give her something later on

i am making an interlude right now that is going over the MC's first date with his ex wife and plan to add a R18 scene at the end and there may be a unwanted R18 in the coming ark

nope he is not a pokemon master he sees the woman in his life as actual people

it will be something he has to work on for a long time and it won't be fixed overnight.

i plan to play it by ear for his job later on

i plan on making this be a slowish burn type book at the start but after chapter 10 i plan on making a time skip to when he is in high School

thanks for the feedback and I plan on making the a recurring thing so every 10 or so chapters i will post a q&a

to go into more detail about it. I plan on making the MC be just a normal dude that's just living life so I have no plans on making him some all powerful mob boss or CEO type of character. he just wants to live a happy life with no drama or pain PS he won't succeed