Another arch with a blind protagonist... I'm already tired of this cliche, it haunts me everywhere.

Has Daphne Greengrass become the object of a love interest again??? Why is it always Daphne? I'm already sick of her name alone, there's always a love line with her in every fanfiction, it's just a nightmare.

If Hogwarts is raising soldiers, then the sooner the child starts school, the better. But I can guess why the author did it... For the sake of speedy copulation, lol.

Another stupid plot, lol. Drop.

What nonsense, he knows about Zoldeo, but doesn't know that he was involved in Leila's death when they showed it to us in plain text in the manga and anime, lol. It is very convenient that he knows the 4 gods of Ishgar, the name of the place where the guild masters gather, but does not know the circumstances that led to the death of his mother))) It would be easier to throw him out into the world without knowledge than with them.

*Dies from cringe*

Dude, the description of the fanfiction is just killer. The authors have become completely lazy, they can't even write a description themselves.

It is rather strange that they were distributed in this way. I would like to see the development of Sakura, a development that will not disappear in an unexpected way at the end of the story, as Kishimoto did, completely devaluing the path of Sakura.

Someone doesn't know how spider sense works... It reacts to absolutely everything, even to the actions of ordinary people, including the camera. And since lizards are predators and their diet includes spiders, Gwen should feel some degree of danger from Peter.

Why did he refine the serum and turn himself into a monster? The meaning of this? I thought that he would remove the very fact of transformation and his basic human form would have all the advantages... I don't see the benefits of transforming into an overgrown lizard at all.

No, it's more like removing an antivirus from a computer that does nothing but useless work and performance degradation.

So far, I like everything. The characters are given proper screen time, and they don't look cardboard, the dialogues are well built. My review will become more extensive when a solid number of chapters appear in fan fiction.

To kill a man who demanded a ransom for pets, lol. Gratuitous cruelty.

Thank you very much.

Hello, could you write a list of good fanfics? I would appreciate it.

The author does not even know the canonical capabilities of the accelerator. The main character has an inconsistent character, he wants to live a simple life where there is no need to strain himself in any case, but then, after a few chapters, he joins a criminal gang for the sake of "releasing dopamine"...

The Potters are an ancient family related to the Peverells, they were part of twenty-eight sacred families, but they were excluded, and they are by no means poor... What's the point of belittling them?

There are enough such freaks in the form of MC in real life, open your eyes a little and be surprised at the amount of shit happening in our world. I have no desire to read about such personalities, at least warn in the description that you will write about an immoral hero.

Ahem, unpleasant memories?

It seems to be a good start, but then the canon begins to repeat itself with minimal changes (the main change is that the main character is weaker than the original Rudeus, oh yes, he also cosplays Emiya Shiro). The whole romance between Lilya and the hero looked strange from the very beginning, and in the end turned into a drama sucked out of a finger.