Sudeept_Guchhait

that's what mc is doing " too much kindness"

people with mantility like you are tents to get stab in the back very quickly.

hey man when will u update apocalypse world transverse system

so, that's the charm of it

this type of content is what is required in ur novel, and u did a great job. keep up

hey author mc is still neive and stupid he believes he has to return the favor eveytime someone does something for him.

hey man why don't u restart ur ( true villain in cultivation world) novel?

hi

man I think u should use some editor tools to fix ur sentences of the novel there r many mistakes in each sentences like names, relationships. he or she so use more editor tool to fix it. ur novel has potential but these small mistakes r bringing it down.

fixed this sentence