yess sir

Anyway this kinda makes me sad. Arigato Author

Wow. Reiniel is really General Danielle nephew? I thought the doctor was joking!

Keep up the good work. Your 1st story you uploaded 14 chapters you are a hardworking fellow!

Too many mysteries and im loving it so far. The way you write improve everytime. Though I miss the battle between goblins.

God! Wow that plot twist is good. I thought the guy that will said that was Reiniel but it's the guy! Who is that?

Yes. me too

im feeling it as well :(

yeah me too, i felt bad for Reiniel and little bit on Raven. its too realistic when it comes to their story it really happened in homeless people and live and puberty

only the author can know this

but maybe im wrong as well maybe he is still a bad guy just pretending to be a good guy

Yeah, i thoughs so too cuz i think he act as a bad guy but with a good guy reason. i think the reason why he left to be senator because he saw how its corrupt

Hear is my idea about this situation in my paranormal mind. I think that the mysterious guy is a good guy but also a bad guy. But a bad guy who is a good guy?

so hello there for the new readers id like to say, i recommended this for you! this is a story. the start is good but this arc i think where, is one of the best on my list since the beginning its too food[img=update][img=recommend]

"My Comission is my Ambition, Colonel" This for sure came from Lieutenant General Reiniel.

God I thought this will be from the Keiser father who fall asleep. I didnt expect this. My favorite character is Lieutenant I cant believe he was living in poverty[img=update]

God I think the story is really getting better to point where I would like to go back in past chapter and repeat reading. Btw, not reading Keiser point of view kinda make him useless for now however im excited on what happened to the hole and the sword.

thank you

alright im done reading now. imma comment right away

thats good i thought im the only one