Already excited :)

Thanks for the chapter that cover looks really good, you should also let him were those robes atleast desribe it lol since it would be cool to imagine when reading. A bit of a comment which by no means you should take to seriously since it is your novel and you decice. But in my opinion I find the reaction of him killing by aang a bit lacklustre so to say since it is a pretty big theme in the story about him not killing and such and him seeing someone kill I would think he would react more disturbed atleast distance himself from that person or trying to convince him. (Although technically in the show he would have killed alot(People he threw of cliffs and such))

Verry good novel so far! First thought he was just a straight up fire bender because the cover art(Didn't look good at ti) so was a fun suprise! Was a bit hard to read for me in the verry first chapter but ones you go through it is a good novel! (First chapter was also good, but was expecting something else which took me a bit to change my mindset)

Just had a thought he probably can make his walls with bedrock and if you think it's ugly you can just do it only with the inside of the walls so when their is like a siege of the walls or something like that the walls can't be broken.

You could also add for evokers that they need a lot of recourses to do their spells, because the magic system they used to use worked only in minecraft and is harder to use on planetos, because magis is less dense, so then it is less attractive to have a lot of evokers.

Only problem could be if they want to use people like the dothraki as experimental things, but for that you have to think of something else + could be plot.

For pillagers I look at them similar as a dothraki or a barbarian tribe or even a bit of mercenary's. So for them you could offer money and use them mainly what they are used for. Vindicator and Evokers are similar to pillagers as they are from the same illiger species, but are more "spiritily/magic" alligned so they have the same goal so I think it should be fine to have the same method. Ofcourse you could also see them differently as them being just inherently being hostile to humans do to race then a ritual or something can work so that you bind them to you so a blood contract as someone else stated or the like. For witches you could see them as wanting to use you as ingredient in game so that is why they attack or being afraid that you would steal. So they are like mad scientists so give them unlimeted resources and they can work for you. Only problem could be if they want to use people like the dothraki as experimental things, but for that you have to think of something else + could be plot

Well maybe he just likes them not everyone wants to do things as efficient as possible that would just turn boring so he is just doing what he thinks is fun and he was more thrown into the position and just kept it as he liked it. So yeah the smart thing to do is only keep villagers, but that is just not the preference of the MC and the author(I think), which I understand.

And of course verry curious how he would act with other characters. With that I also have a question will there be large time skips so he interacts more in the game of thrones series era and he is just now estabilishing his strenght so that he has enough time to grow before interactions, or more in the era in which he now finds himself and would be more fast paced in growing.

Since I can't be a ghost reader for a chapter I will give some feedback. Great story so far with a really interesting concept. Wouldn't have thought of it before except that I saw another story with the same concept only with modded minecraft and written less in my taste. Like the structure of your chapters are great with both describtions and what he is doing in good proportions maybe a bit more interactions, but that will also come late probably. Also great pacing so far. Maybe a thing that you could add is pictures of the buildings he build and things like that. I am curious how a wither would look and if he builds a beacon when he starts building his own city.

Since I can't be a ghost reader for a chapter I will give some feedback. Great story so far with a really interesting concept. Wouldn't have thought of it before except that I saw another story with the same concept only with modded minecraft and written less in my taste. Like the structure of your chapters are great with both describtions and what he is doing in good proportions maybe a bit more interactions, but that will also come late probably. Also great pacing so far. Maybe a thing that you could add is pictures of the buildings he build and things like that.

I don't feel talken to I am not at all a complete ghost reader lol

Great story so far don't remember if I left a review or not but either way here is one. The power of the MC is great it's not to OP (yet) and leaves a lot of space for future improvements other than that he has a good flaw that also gives back the threat of death. For the future it might be harder to write since the original is not finished yet but we will see by then what happens. Only negative of the story is the harem tag, which I generally don't like to read since most of the time it will take away from the characters personality from the original written story but we will see how you do it either way good luck further!

Grammer until now was good I think only place where I found something was in the chapter before when Aemon walked into the room and it said "The Aemon woaked over" instead of "Aemon walked over" ,but for this chapter it was good.

Its just that the environment describing and such is just a tad repetitive in content. atleast for now haven't read the rest yet.

Thanks! didn't know that

Question do you already have your original work posted and if so how is it called, (because it didn't show up in your works for me) and if not do you know when you will begin posting it?

Great story so far haven't read a witcher story/forgotten realms on this side this good for a long while great job! Hope that the story keeps doing good and also best one star I have given lol

Great story so far haven't read a witcher story/forgotten realms on this side this good for a long while great job!

Could not have worked if it wasn't the main characters name lol