The overall flow of the story is good. I love how you end up putting songs and other stuff in it as it related to real-life scenarios. There are hardly any grammar mistakes and the way you peace the sentences of good....for a beginner that is. I'll be waiting for the newest chaps. Good luck!

You are making me blush! I'll be making it into a comedic tale so you'll def enjoy it.

I'll say it...I suck at writing in first person and that is the reason why I decided to write this novel first. It will get better later on. And I'll be uploading one or two chaps a week due to college work. Thanks for the support.

guess I'm not a pervert then.

it's one month already

Before I start reading this novel tell me who is the top and who who the bottom.

Cute tuny fairies, tiny fairy men. I want them....not became of stupid reasons but just because they are so adorable.

So the forest of beginnings is the same forest as the one where the mushroom hero fought the other miasmic beasts. If I talk with the sense of this world then it was deforestation and in magic sense it is probably due to miasmic beast

I'm still waiting

Not gonna lie but if I ever see a random mimic slug in the forest I'll run like the wind. I can't bear to kill cute and small things.

Wise watermelons and intelligence lettuce sound weird to my ears. Dunno why but I had a rough image of a watermelon with white beard and wrinkled eyes alongside a lettuce wearing glasses appear in my mind the moment I read them.

I really want to become a ghost. Their powers are amazing.

Now that is the best way to kill stronger enemies

I really would have killed them before they departed. Its better to destroy a monster baby then wait for it to come back to bite me later on. I have the aptitude to be a bona-fide villain so no card about lives of others.

I get the Arifureta vibes here. did the author get inspired from the anime to write this masterpiece? it has got me hooked on it as well.

And then they got friend-zoned. I am just thinking....what if, just want if you can bring a dead person back to life using life magic but it'll prolly not be possible because of the soul and stuff.

Omg! I thought they won't know about each others characters till the late end but it kinda happened rn. didnt expect that. The way she woke up late happens to me most of the time but thankfully my school is o lying 5 min away from my home so always reach on time.

the god might have just reincarnated the human teenager from Earth into the Demon King. Author is giving hints.

Sylphie's harem is set in stone. Aquarina, Ignatius, Nuturia, Alice and the last would be her tree spirit,

The heck! is he the Demon king?